s*n
2 楼
most my friends and coworkers buy iPads are for their kids. Many teenages
now only want iPads ... to them it is a fashion and toys.
now only want iPads ... to them it is a fashion and toys.
s*y
3 楼
我写的：
I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
您改的？
I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
您改的？
f*r
4 楼
有剧透，慎。
是don的女友letty。第4集，她为了换取don（受fbi指控和通缉而流亡）的自由，自愿
与brian合作一项任务，结果死了。
在第5集里，曾经追求brian的女友mia未果的糙汉，好像叫vince，就拿这个说事，叫
don不要跟brian一个鼻孔出气。
这次把letty又给弄活，看来是要给下一个续集做铺垫。
题外话：
剧情象十一罗汉，但又没有十一罗汉的精巧安排，有点失望。
用charger拖几吨重的铁柜，当自己是推土机啊？
vin diesel已显老态龙钟，再拍续集，恐怕也没有furious的劲头了。
是don的女友letty。第4集，她为了换取don（受fbi指控和通缉而流亡）的自由，自愿
与brian合作一项任务，结果死了。
在第5集里，曾经追求brian的女友mia未果的糙汉，好像叫vince，就拿这个说事，叫
don不要跟brian一个鼻孔出气。
这次把letty又给弄活，看来是要给下一个续集做铺垫。
题外话：
剧情象十一罗汉，但又没有十一罗汉的精巧安排，有点失望。
用charger拖几吨重的铁柜，当自己是推土机啊？
vin diesel已显老态龙钟，再拍续集，恐怕也没有furious的劲头了。
f*h
5 楼
能让大众喜欢和接受，就是成功啊。PS3和Xoom都做不到Wii和Ipad的效果。
l*u
6 楼
apple 很强大.
【在 s*********y 的大作中提到】
: 我写的：
: I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
: dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
: following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
: freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
: transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
: experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
: and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
: 您改的？
【在 s*********y 的大作中提到】
: 我写的：
: I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
: dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
: following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
: freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
: transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
: experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
: and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
: 您改的？
V*9
7 楼
Suggestion: Change APPLE to Orange.
【在 s*********y 的大作中提到】
: 我写的：
: I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
: dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
: following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
: freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
: transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
: experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
: and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
: 您改的？
【在 s*********y 的大作中提到】
: 我写的：
: I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
: dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
: following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
: freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
: transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
: experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
: and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
: 您改的？
h*o
8 楼
My opinion
I assume it is a introductory/leading paragraph rather than a detailed
specific aim experiment design.
As a proposal, you dont' have to list the detailed methods in an
introductory paragraph. I would trim it a lot to something like,
To investigate the role of APPLE activation/dysregulation in APPLE
diseases, we propose to use a variety of biochemical, genetical and
analytical assays that summate at the mechanistic role of APPLE in APPLE
disease.
Proceed to expand the
【在 s*********y 的大作中提到】
: 我写的：
: I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
: dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
: following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
: freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
: transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
: experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
: and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
: 您改的？
I assume it is a introductory/leading paragraph rather than a detailed
specific aim experiment design.
As a proposal, you dont' have to list the detailed methods in an
introductory paragraph. I would trim it a lot to something like,
To investigate the role of APPLE activation/dysregulation in APPLE
diseases, we propose to use a variety of biochemical, genetical and
analytical assays that summate at the mechanistic role of APPLE in APPLE
disease.
Proceed to expand the
【在 s*********y 的大作中提到】
: 我写的：
: I am also interested in the regulation of APPLE activation and its
: dys-regulation in APPLE diseases. Specifically I will work on the
: following questions/aims using APPLE trees expressing engineered APPLEs,
: freshly isolated APPLEs from APPLE trees with APPLE diseases, and
: transgenic APPLE through knives and forks with a combination of other
: experimental approaches including APPLE genetics, microarray, mass-spec
: and traditional biochemistry and molecular biology assays.
: 您改的？
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