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谁能帮我改个句子？# Immigration - 落地生根

s*y2011-01-04 08:01

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感觉写的不好，谁帮忙改改，谢谢先
Dr. XXX has published 12 original articles (8 first-authored) and 1
conference proceeding in prestigious and authoritative journals with
worldwide circulation. In addition, Dr. XXX’s works were presented at 2
international meetings.

x*S2011-01-04 08:01

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Dr.XXX's excellent findings have been published as 12 original articles in
XX world leading peer review journals in xxxx field, such as xx, xx. as
well as an international conference proceeding. All these publications have
built up Dr. XXX's international recognition. Therefore, he was invited by
two international conference to present his work. These conference attract
more than 10,000 researchers in xx field to interact to each other, which
further extend Dr.XXX international acclaim.

b*02011-01-04 08:01

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much much better

【在 s****y 的大作中提到】

: 感觉写的不好，谁帮忙改改，谢谢先
: Dr. XXX has published 12 original articles (8 first-authored) and 1
: conference proceeding in prestigious and authoritative journals with
: worldwide circulation. In addition, Dr. XXX’s works were presented at 2
: international meetings.