怎么在独立推荐信里突出推荐人基于你的工作改进？# Immigration - 落地生根
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一位不认识的教授看到我文章里的工作，就其中一点改进了一下，在某conference上发
了一篇文章。好不容易请到他老人家帮我写推荐信，可是在写推荐信稿子具体吹嘘的时
候发现没有那么好写。一方面不能不给独立推荐人面子，把自己吹嘘得太狠；一方面又
觉得写别人improve upon我原来的工作，在不太懂学术圈的IO面前反而显得像是个弱点。
开头写上“My research paper ..., have not only referenced Dr. ABC's paper,
but come up with a ... to improve upon the approach proposed in his paper.”
具体介绍contribution的时候写道，“Second,Dr. ABC's research work proposed
two innovative approaches that inspired other research works. The first
approach ... The second approach ... My own research work made used of the
first approach and invented another approach to improve upon the second
approach.”
被LD痛扁，说写得太弱了，简直是把好事吹成了坏事。自己回头看看也觉得写得很弱。
能请各位高手支个招吗？
了一篇文章。好不容易请到他老人家帮我写推荐信，可是在写推荐信稿子具体吹嘘的时
候发现没有那么好写。一方面不能不给独立推荐人面子，把自己吹嘘得太狠；一方面又
觉得写别人improve upon我原来的工作，在不太懂学术圈的IO面前反而显得像是个弱点。
开头写上“My research paper ..., have not only referenced Dr. ABC's paper,
but come up with a ... to improve upon the approach proposed in his paper.”
具体介绍contribution的时候写道，“Second,Dr. ABC's research work proposed
two innovative approaches that inspired other research works. The first
approach ... The second approach ... My own research work made used of the
first approach and invented another approach to improve upon the second
approach.”
被LD痛扁，说写得太弱了，简直是把好事吹成了坏事。自己回头看看也觉得写得很弱。
能请各位高手支个招吗？