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大家帮看下推荐信中这句话有问题吗

大家帮看下推荐信中这句话有问题吗# Immigration - 落地生根

b*e2011-11-21 08:11

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I have never met Dr. L, but I am familiar with his work and his research
group, since we are sharing similar research interests. After thoroughly
reviewing/reading Dr. L's CV and academic papers published in international
scientific journals and conferences, it is my professional opinion that
the contributions made and being made by Dr. L substantially exceed those
made by the majority of research scientists with the comparable
qualifications
in the field.
会不会给IO感觉就凭看了CV跟publication来写的推荐信，没那么可靠？这段话怎么改
改会更好点？

p*l2011-11-21 08:11

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Do not include "After thoroughly reviewing/reading Dr. L's CV and academic
papers published in internationalscientific journals and conferences",
because it sounds like the recommender did not know you. Otherwise, s/he
will not need to look at you CV to know that you are outstanding.

g*32011-11-21 08:11

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我觉得不妥，这不就间接的证明你在本领域没名气么，要看你的cv才知道。至于怎么写
，问班上各大牛，我自己的还没批，说了也没有说服力。

b*e2011-11-21 08:11

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but in fact what i want to emphasize is that he is a totally independant
reviewer and never met me.

【在 p*******l 的大作中提到】

: Do not include "After thoroughly reviewing/reading Dr. L's CV and academic
: papers published in internationalscientific journals and conferences",
: because it sounds like the recommender did not know you. Otherwise, s/he
: will not need to look at you CV to know that you are outstanding.

b*e2011-11-21 08:11

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谢谢，这point很好，我以前没想到

【在 g*******3 的大作中提到】

: 我觉得不妥，这不就间接的证明你在本领域没名气么，要看你的cv才知道。至于怎么写
: ，问班上各大牛，我自己的还没批，说了也没有说服力。

p*l2011-11-21 08:11

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Never met you does not mean do not know you.
Like I have never met Bill Gates, however, I do not need to read his CV to
know him.

【在 b***e 的大作中提到】

: but in fact what i want to emphasize is that he is a totally independant
: reviewer and never met me.

t*l2011-11-21 08:11

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不会吧。我每个推荐信上都是说"never met but I know him through him
publications...."
我今天file的，岂不惨了。。。

b*r2011-11-21 08:11

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我的也这样写的，没问题~~~

【在 t*********l 的大作中提到】

: 不会吧。我每个推荐信上都是说"never met but I know him through him
: publications...."
: 我今天file的，岂不惨了。。。

p*l2011-11-21 08:11

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这样写是对的。不要说“don't know Dr. XXX".
You are assuming that you are so outstanding that everyone in your shared
field knows you, even someone has never met you.

【在 t*********l 的大作中提到】

: 不会吧。我每个推荐信上都是说"never met but I know him through him
: publications...."
: 我今天file的，岂不惨了。。。

b*e2011-11-21 08:11

10 楼

我也是在很多模板上看到这么写的，只是自己咀嚼了几下后发现不是那么顺口

【在 t*********l 的大作中提到】

: 不会吧。我每个推荐信上都是说"never met but I know him through him
: publications...."
: 我今天file的，岂不惨了。。。

f*e2011-11-21 08:11

11 楼

"I have never met Dr. L, but I am familiar with his work and his research
group, since we are sharing similar research interests."
这句话一点问题没有. 它可以显示INDEPENDENT.
有问题的是这句:
"...the majority of research scientists with the comparable qualifications
in the field."
好象是说你在某个群体范围内是优秀的(比如和年轻学者比, 比如和AP比...) EB1A好象
是无论怎样都是优秀的.