紧急求助！这句话是否可出现在独立推荐信中？# Immigration - 落地生根
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现在推荐人是这么写的：
Therefore, I have welcomed the opportunity to meet Dr. AA in person when he
was presenting his remarkable work at the Annual Meeting of the “American
Society for Pharmacology and Experi¬mental Therapeutics”.
因为是独立推荐人，防止IO质疑独立性，改成下面是否更好？
Therefore, Dr. AA’s research captured my attention when he was presenting
his remarkable work at the Annual Meeting of the “American Society for
Pharmacology and Experi¬mental Therapeutics”.
现在推荐人准备签字，版上有经验的朋友快帮帮我，我在线等答案，谢谢了！
Therefore, I have welcomed the opportunity to meet Dr. AA in person when he
was presenting his remarkable work at the Annual Meeting of the “American
Society for Pharmacology and Experi¬mental Therapeutics”.
因为是独立推荐人，防止IO质疑独立性，改成下面是否更好？
Therefore, Dr. AA’s research captured my attention when he was presenting
his remarkable work at the Annual Meeting of the “American Society for
Pharmacology and Experi¬mental Therapeutics”.
现在推荐人准备签字，版上有经验的朋友快帮帮我，我在线等答案，谢谢了！