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n*8
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Eternal Fountain
At the foot of a towering mountain,
Hides a twinkling fountain.
Discovered by a thirsty traveler,
Confused by its void of water.
In despair he decides to depart.
Wait, open your heart,
Says the summit of the mountain,
Drink the Light from the Eternal Fountain.
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wh
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心中没水井里也没,心中有水井里也有?

【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: Eternal Fountain
: At the foot of a towering mountain,
: Hides a twinkling fountain.
: Discovered by a thirsty traveler,
: Confused by its void of water.
: In despair he decides to depart.
: Wait, open your heart,
: Says the summit of the mountain,
: Drink the Light from the Eternal Fountain.

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n*8
3
尝试基督教题材的诗, 懂得太少, 写得也含混, 想说找水是错的, 该饮基督之光。
谢谢文豪点评!

【在 wh 的大作中提到】
: 心中没水井里也没,心中有水井里也有?
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