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Echo 短诗 写给色盲的人读的# LeisureTime - 读书听歌看电影
n*8
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Echo
I look for traces of green in a farm of fossils.
Where a forest once was young.
Where I once heard breeze brush leaves and branches.
And their echoes still vibrate in my aged heart.
I look for traces of blue in a desert of plateau.
Where an ocean once was young.
Where I once heard waves batter cliffs and beaches.
And their echoes still vibrate in my desiccated heart.
I look for traces of white in a universe of dirt.
Where innocence once was young.
Where I once heard love sing a song of truth.
And their echoes still vibrate in my tainted heart.
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t*g
2
个人觉得,这是到目前为止,你写的最棒的一首!

:Echo
:I look for traces of green in a farm of fossils.
:Where a forest once was young.
:Where I once heard breeze brush leaves and branches.
:And their echoes still vibrate in my aged heart.
:I look for traces of blue in a desert of plateau.
:Where an ocean once was young.
:Where I once heard waves batter cliffs and beaches.
:And their echoes still vibrate in my aged heart.
:I look for traces of white in a universe of dirt.
:..........

【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: Echo
: I look for traces of green in a farm of fossils.
: Where a forest once was young.
: Where I once heard breeze brush leaves and branches.
: And their echoes still vibrate in my aged heart.
: I look for traces of blue in a desert of plateau.
: Where an ocean once was young.
: Where I once heard waves batter cliffs and beaches.
: And their echoes still vibrate in my desiccated heart.
: I look for traces of white in a universe of dirt.

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s*l
3
Where an ocean once was young.
有感觉!

【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: Echo
: I look for traces of green in a farm of fossils.
: Where a forest once was young.
: Where I once heard breeze brush leaves and branches.
: And their echoes still vibrate in my aged heart.
: I look for traces of blue in a desert of plateau.
: Where an ocean once was young.
: Where I once heard waves batter cliffs and beaches.
: And their echoes still vibrate in my desiccated heart.
: I look for traces of white in a universe of dirt.

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n*8
4
谢谢 唐风和skl!
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wh
5
学了个desiccated ...

【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: Echo
: I look for traces of green in a farm of fossils.
: Where a forest once was young.
: Where I once heard breeze brush leaves and branches.
: And their echoes still vibrate in my aged heart.
: I look for traces of blue in a desert of plateau.
: Where an ocean once was young.
: Where I once heard waves batter cliffs and beaches.
: And their echoes still vibrate in my desiccated heart.
: I look for traces of white in a universe of dirt.

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n*8
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我写的时候, 旁边放着新东方的红宝书, :D

【在 wh 的大作中提到】
: 学了个desiccated ...
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d*1
7
很有意境,就是不喜欢aged,lz换个词吧?
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n*8
8
有好建议吗? petrified 如何?

【在 d********1 的大作中提到】
: 很有意境,就是不喜欢aged,lz换个词吧?
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d*1
9
嗯嗯,unchanged, revered,怎样:)?。。森林中万物依土而生作,周而复始,哪怕
再访时人事皆非,取我心不变,敬仰自然之气息

【在 n******8 的大作中提到】
: 有好建议吗? petrified 如何?
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n*8
10
你的心一定很年轻。 我的心太老了。 哈哈哈

【在 d********1 的大作中提到】
: 嗯嗯,unchanged, revered,怎样:)?。。森林中万物依土而生作,周而复始,哪怕
: 再访时人事皆非,取我心不变,敬仰自然之气息

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