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n*82017-05-15 07:05

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Cello and his shadow
A lonely cello,
Talks to no one but his shadow.
In a tone like wavering willow,
In a color like mellowing meadow.
Till the sun flees.
Cello panics and pleas:
Shadow, shadow, stay with me!
For I will sing you nightly glee.
And my strings will never pluck sorrow,
For I need you every tomorrow.

wh2017-05-15 07:05

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哈哈，你真能找词，找到那么多ow！

【在 n******8 的大作中提到】

: Cello and his shadow
: A lonely cello,
: Talks to no one but his shadow.
: In a tone like wavering willow,
: In a color like mellowing meadow.
: Till the sun flees.
: Cello panics and pleas:
: Shadow, shadow, stay with me!
: For I will sing you nightly glee.
: And my strings will never pluck sorrow,

n*82017-05-15 07:05

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哈哈哈，试着按照你的建议写，有悠扬的感觉吗？还是像顺口溜：D

【在 wh 的大作中提到】

: 哈哈，你真能找词，找到那么多ow！

t*g2017-05-15 07:05

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有 every tomorrow 的说法吗？

：Cello and his shadow
：A lonely cello,
：Talks to no one but his shadow.
：In a tone like wavering willow,
：In a color like mellowing meadow.
：Till the sun flees.
：Cello panics and pleas:
：Shadow, shadow, stay with me!
：For I will sing you nightly glee.
：And my strings will never pluck sorrow,
：..........

【在 n******8 的大作中提到】

: 哈哈哈，试着按照你的建议写，有悠扬的感觉吗？还是像顺口溜：D

n*82017-05-15 07:05

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写的是 chinglish，每一个明天：D

【在 t******g 的大作中提到】

: 有 every tomorrow 的说法吗？
:
: ：Cello and his shadow
: ：A lonely cello,
: ：Talks to no one but his shadow.
: ：In a tone like wavering willow,
: ：In a color like mellowing meadow.
: ：Till the sun flees.
: ：Cello panics and pleas:
: ：Shadow, shadow, stay with me!

wh2017-05-15 07:05

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我也不懂哎，对诗一向不大有感觉……稍觉得韵脚好像太密集；mellowing meadow很好
玩，但不知道是不是像顺口溜了。:) 我去问问别人。

【在 n******8 的大作中提到】

: 哈哈哈，试着按照你的建议写，有悠扬的感觉吗？还是像顺口溜：D