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金属氢,全氮阴离子,可燃冰,哪个好找工作?# Chemistry - 化学
A*T
1
近期借到一朋友咨询,说想过国内一咨询公司到洛杉矶做美甲工作,月薪4千美元,签
两年签证,到期可延2年。咨询公司说是办L1B签证。收费38000RMB。人到了美国
一年后再交11万RMB。这样基本上第一年是白干。她在国内有美容美甲资质,在国内上
的学校的证书可在国外被承认,所以可能不需要再在美国考资格证。但不知这事靠不靠
谱。
我对此也不熟,想请教大家出出意见。多谢。
以下是我在网上找到的相关招聘启事,好像挺正规的。
公司资质齐全,海外实体多样,实力雄厚,可切实帮助客户实现海外致富梦想(如果您
身边有想要出国的朋友,欢迎推荐,我们将跟您签订正式合同,给予丰厚返利)
一、申请条件:
(1)、年龄:22-45周岁;
(2)、性别:不限;
(3)、初中以上学历即可
(4)、具有美容、推拿、美甲、美发、修眉等中级资格证书。三年以上美甲、美容、
美发师工作经验;会基础修甲,彩绘,3D彩绘,能独立完成水晶甲,光疗甲的操作!是
需要进修者不可多得的好项目;
(5)、能吃苦耐劳、身体健康、无传染病,无犯罪记录。
二、海外合作公司境外安排提供的待遇:
(1)、税后收入:3600美元/月,每周上班时间40小时(每天8小时,每周5天),40小
时以外算加班,加班按照平时收入标准的1.25倍--1.5倍计算;海外合作方提供吃住信
息费用自理,每月给予客户650美元生活补贴;
(2)、可享受免费的医疗保险和工伤保险;
(3)、可申请家属团聚美国,期间也可回国探亲,无需再次办理签证;
(4)、可以享受美国完善的福利待遇:
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H*i
2
Subject: Reform Administrative Procedures for Employment-based Immigration
Process
Dear Mr. President,
If a dog comes to your home, bringing friendship, loyalty, and help, you
treat him as family. You won’t live with him for many years, but in the
meanwhile ready to kick him out of your house at any time.
We come to this country because we love this country, and we can help make
her better. We want to make this country better because our children are
growing up here. Our children are growing up here because we spend our best
years working for this country. We are helpers, friends, and parents. But
in the meanwhile we’re ready to be kicked out of this country at any time.
In USCIS, in Department of State and Department of Labor, we are employment-
based immigration petitioners. All men are created equal, except us
employment-based immigration petitioners.
We come from thousands of miles away, bringing to this country our knowledge
and experience, abiding by U.S. laws and regulations, contributing to U.S.
economic growth and cultural diversity. We help U.S. employers start
entrepreneurships, grow businesses, and manage global operations. The more
competitive U.S. companies become, the more wealth and jobs are created,
hence a more powerful United States.
By the current employment-based immigration process, no matter how long you
have been helping, no matter how much you have been contributing, no matter
how well you have been behaving, no matter how proud you feel about your
children, no matter how loyal you are to U.S. culture, if you lose your job,
you have to find another job immediately or leave this country immediately.
Why does the current employment-based immigration process have to put us in
such an inhumane situation, or indoggy situation? Why we choose to abide by
the law, only to find ourselves the most regulated human beings? Why you
would allow such a process to discriminate us in the fashion that you won’t
treat your dog?
We urge you to immediately reform administrative procedures for employment-
based immigration process:
1. Grant a grace period for employment-based immigration petitioners
proportionally to the time they have been working for U.S. employers.
Ideally if a foreign worker has been legally working in U.S. for 5 years and
lost her job, she should be given a 5-month grace period to find out
whether another U.S. employer needs her knowledge and skills.
2. Allow employment-based immigration petitioners to submit I-485 forms
if they have been legally working in U.S. for 5 years and are 180 days since
their I-140 petitions have been approved.
a) In the first place, we can’t choose where we were born. It’s unfair
to assert our birthplaces as our original sin. The current process
mercilessly punishes us if we were born in populous countries by making us
wait year after year before we can file I-485 to adjust our immigration
status.
b) In the second place, we are not even challenging any law. We are
simply asking for an administrative convenience. The law sets a limited
number of visas to be issued to employment-based immigrants. We respect the
law and always abide by the laws. But the law doesn’t forbid submitting I
-485 applications.
c) In the third place, we are not even challenging the Visa Bulletin.
Although immigrants from less populous countries receive their green cards
in a few months, for those from populous countries, every month, Mr. Charles
Oppenheim in the Department of State decides the cut-off dates so that
nobody can file I-485 form if their “Priority Date” is not prior to the
cut-ff date in Visa Bulletin. As a result, the Visa Bulletin is the most
read document among employment-based immigrants community. We respect the
Visa Bulletin but we believe the Visa Bulletin was established to control
the issuance of green cards, rather than to control the filing of I-485.
To summarize, we urge you to reform the current inhuman immigration
procedures by allowing a grace period and separating I-485 filing from Visa
Bulletin. Such two simple and small steps will significantly relieve us of
tremendous pressures that have been hindering us from visiting our families
in home countries, from making long-term investments such as buying a house,
from … 大家一起想,最后由NIU专家组决定。
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h*c
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有哪几家大公司做这方面的?未来人类使用能源的方式将发生革命性的改变,想想就鸡
冻。
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H*i
4
各位务必不留情面地、血淋淋地、千刀万剐地尽情修改!引经据典,圣经、诗歌、名言
,一起用,我们最后看看怎么写好!
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e*s
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全氮是高能炸药,金属氢也是,都是未来的方向啊。ISIS最需要
好啊 好啊

【在 h**c 的大作中提到】
: 有哪几家大公司做这方面的?未来人类使用能源的方式将发生革命性的改变,想想就鸡
: 冻。

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d*p
6
Obama will not understand, all his relatives are illegal immigrants, he
doesn't care one bit of legal ebers.
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n*5
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金属氢大规模生产早着呢
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q*x
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we know obama don't understand economy and diploma. who cares?

【在 d*******p 的大作中提到】
: Obama will not understand, all his relatives are illegal immigrants, he
: doesn't care one bit of legal ebers.

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h*c
9
难道教授说的美好前景都是骗人的?

【在 n********5 的大作中提到】
: 金属氢大规模生产早着呢
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d*g
10
PHD还不如狗。唉
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s*r
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1. the beginning is no good.
2. too long.
3. just highlight what we want.
4. use numbers/evidence to support our argument.
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H*i
12
Thanks for the input. I need a lot of help with the numbers.

【在 s***r 的大作中提到】
: 1. the beginning is no good.
: 2. too long.
: 3. just highlight what we want.
: 4. use numbers/evidence to support our argument.

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s*r
13
Take 200,000 as total and assume the average salary is 60,000. So far we
have paid taxes about $3 billion (200,000 x 60,000 x 0.25,
assuming 25% tax rate).
Correct me if I am wrong.
Also assume these 200,000 belong to 40,000 families. And each family bought
a
house with the average price of 200,000 - we have contributed
$8 billion into the GDP.
Also assume 5% of these 200,000 WOULD HAVE started up a small business
(not mentioning sth like GOOGLE or facebook) - that is 10,000 businesses.
Assuming each business hires 3 persons with annual gross sales 500,000. The
USA would have lost $5 billion total revenue and would have created 50,000
more new jobs.
I suggest we focus on the contributions to this country, to the economy, and
to the job creation.
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H*i
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大家一起帮我改。千刀万剐地改!谢谢!
寄信人: XXXX (XXX)
标 题: Re: 白宫网站请愿书初稿
发信站: 未名空间 (Sat Sep 3 11:02:44 2011)
来 源: 74.125.
Thanks for your great work! I think the beginning is good, very very good.
But starting from 1...., it's too tedious and I don't think anyone who's not
directly in charge of employment-based immigration will understand. We need
to make them shorter, briefer and more understandable.
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H*i
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please help me with hard number. Any numbers coming out of assumption will
be attacked.

bought

【在 s***r 的大作中提到】
: Take 200,000 as total and assume the average salary is 60,000. So far we
: have paid taxes about $3 billion (200,000 x 60,000 x 0.25,
: assuming 25% tax rate).
: Correct me if I am wrong.
: Also assume these 200,000 belong to 40,000 families. And each family bought
: a
: house with the average price of 200,000 - we have contributed
: $8 billion into the GDP.
: Also assume 5% of these 200,000 WOULD HAVE started up a small business
: (not mentioning sth like GOOGLE or facebook) - that is 10,000 businesses.

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s*r
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We need more people help with the numbers. I am not good at this. Also, as
it is a 请愿书, not a house hearing; the numbers should be well founded, BUT
NOT NECESSARILY 100% accurate.
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f*8
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你还是不要发言了!因为你的发言没有任何建设性。

【在 d*******p 的大作中提到】
: Obama will not understand, all his relatives are illegal immigrants, he
: doesn't care one bit of legal ebers.

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f*8
18
我同意1, 2, 3三点。
4也有道理。

【在 s***r 的大作中提到】
: 1. the beginning is no good.
: 2. too long.
: 3. just highlight what we want.
: 4. use numbers/evidence to support our argument.

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H*i
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不要紧,这将是一个集体创作过程,NIU里面人才辈出,很多人会对初稿进行千刀万剐
地修改。
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d*g
20
My suggestions:
Delete the dog part.
Start with "I have a dream", then add your paragraph 2 as the dream.
then copy H1b from this article "
If You Care About Immigration, You Should Care About the STAPLE Act"
The link is below
http://www.foxnews.com/opinion/2011/05/16/care-immigration-care
and we are here legal.
and then the rest of yours.
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d*g
21
some numbers below..
25.3% of all engineering and technology companies established in the U.S.
between 1995 and 2005 inclusive had at least one immigrant key founder.
Together, this pool of immigrant8founded companies was responsible for
generating more than $52 billion in 2005 sales and creating just under 450,
000 jobs as of 2005. (Vivek Wadhwa et.al., 2007) America can’t afford to
lose this valuable talent
from the link below
http://competeamerica.org/sites/default/files/files/Innovation%
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d*p
22
who do you think you are?

【在 f*******8 的大作中提到】
: 你还是不要发言了!因为你的发言没有任何建设性。
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a*n
23
有个想法:在最终定稿时,NIU能不能花钱雇专业
人士做最后的润色?
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w*s
24
一定会的。 钱多好办事。 大家捐钱吧。NIU财务公开。请登陆www.niunational.com捐
款和查看财务。

【在 a***n 的大作中提到】
: 有个想法:在最终定稿时,NIU能不能花钱雇专业
: 人士做最后的润色?

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y*n
25
I feel this is a good start.给点儿鼓励和赞叹.

best
But

【在 H******i 的大作中提到】
: Subject: Reform Administrative Procedures for Employment-based Immigration
: Process
: Dear Mr. President,
: If a dog comes to your home, bringing friendship, loyalty, and help, you
: treat him as family. You won’t live with him for many years, but in the
: meanwhile ready to kick him out of your house at any time.
: We come to this country because we love this country, and we can help make
: her better. We want to make this country better because our children are
: growing up here. Our children are growing up here because we spend our best
: years working for this country. We are helpers, friends, and parents. But

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l*y
26
我觉得从白宫的思考角度出发比较好,他们不care你是否是人才,不care你是否能帮助
美国,美国这个国家历来都是人才拿来当柴烧的,美国有很多talented people 都是不
得志的。他们现在弄这么一个请愿的东东不是出于想帮助美国人,更不是想帮助我们。
他们要的是从中选取一个题材,作为噢巴马连任时吹牛比的材料。清楚了这个之后,我
觉得可以从最近美国经济低迷,就业率低为出发点。结合我们的目的,提出你的先递
485的设想,希望板上通晓法律的指点一下,这个先递485的设想是否和移民法有天大的
障碍,否则得另寻法门。可以例举几大好处,比如EAD renewal fee--可以增加多少
就业机会。拿到EAD卡后,有才能得人出去创业,可以带动经济,增加就业。大家准备
买房带动经济。
反面得例子,可以说,我现在每年会告诉1000个高科技人才朋友,不要到美国来,you
will work like a slave, feel like in prison. 或者说国内得朋友都是看着我是否
成功而决定是否来美国的。这样下去美国的人才流失会越来越严重。

best
But

【在 H******i 的大作中提到】
: Subject: Reform Administrative Procedures for Employment-based Immigration
: Process
: Dear Mr. President,
: If a dog comes to your home, bringing friendship, loyalty, and help, you
: treat him as family. You won’t live with him for many years, but in the
: meanwhile ready to kick him out of your house at any time.
: We come to this country because we love this country, and we can help make
: her better. We want to make this country better because our children are
: growing up here. Our children are growing up here because we spend our best
: years working for this country. We are helpers, friends, and parents. But

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q*x
27
第一句就自比为狗?楼主我真想骂你。

best
But

【在 H******i 的大作中提到】
: Subject: Reform Administrative Procedures for Employment-based Immigration
: Process
: Dear Mr. President,
: If a dog comes to your home, bringing friendship, loyalty, and help, you
: treat him as family. You won’t live with him for many years, but in the
: meanwhile ready to kick him out of your house at any time.
: We come to this country because we love this country, and we can help make
: her better. We want to make this country better because our children are
: growing up here. Our children are growing up here because we spend our best
: years working for this country. We are helpers, friends, and parents. But

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q*x
28
为何要提renew fee?你比巴菲特还高尚。

you

【在 l***y 的大作中提到】
: 我觉得从白宫的思考角度出发比较好,他们不care你是否是人才,不care你是否能帮助
: 美国,美国这个国家历来都是人才拿来当柴烧的,美国有很多talented people 都是不
: 得志的。他们现在弄这么一个请愿的东东不是出于想帮助美国人,更不是想帮助我们。
: 他们要的是从中选取一个题材,作为噢巴马连任时吹牛比的材料。清楚了这个之后,我
: 觉得可以从最近美国经济低迷,就业率低为出发点。结合我们的目的,提出你的先递
: 485的设想,希望板上通晓法律的指点一下,这个先递485的设想是否和移民法有天大的
: 障碍,否则得另寻法门。可以例举几大好处,比如EAD renewal fee--可以增加多少
: 就业机会。拿到EAD卡后,有才能得人出去创业,可以带动经济,增加就业。大家准备
: 买房带动经济。
: 反面得例子,可以说,我现在每年会告诉1000个高科技人才朋友,不要到美国来,you

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w*s
29
delete the dog part! we are never dog in any sense!

【在 d*****g 的大作中提到】
: My suggestions:
: Delete the dog part.
: Start with "I have a dream", then add your paragraph 2 as the dream.
: then copy H1b from this article "
: If You Care About Immigration, You Should Care About the STAPLE Act"
: The link is below
: http://www.foxnews.com/opinion/2011/05/16/care-immigration-care
: and we are here legal.
: and then the rest of yours.

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I*8
30
没有好处谁会干啊,你总得给他们点好处啊。等我们有了自由,钱有的是啊。给钱他们
愿意干就不错了。

【在 q****x 的大作中提到】
: 为何要提renew fee?你比巴菲特还高尚。
:
: you

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q*x
31
eb5

【在 I****8 的大作中提到】
: 没有好处谁会干啊,你总得给他们点好处啊。等我们有了自由,钱有的是啊。给钱他们
: 愿意干就不错了。

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I*8
32
先有自由,才能创业,才能有钱。 这个是鸡和蛋的问题。EB5就可以看出美国人要钱不
要人的本性,钱是第一位的。我们这些人才,他们不希罕。

【在 q****x 的大作中提到】
: eb5
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y*r
33
反正不交485我就不买房子。
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M*t
34
i have posted my initial input on NIU website EB23 zone.
http://www.niunational.com/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=531&ext

best
But

【在 H******i 的大作中提到】
: Subject: Reform Administrative Procedures for Employment-based Immigration
: Process
: Dear Mr. President,
: If a dog comes to your home, bringing friendship, loyalty, and help, you
: treat him as family. You won’t live with him for many years, but in the
: meanwhile ready to kick him out of your house at any time.
: We come to this country because we love this country, and we can help make
: her better. We want to make this country better because our children are
: growing up here. Our children are growing up here because we spend our best
: years working for this country. We are helpers, friends, and parents. But

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r*n
35
写的太搞笑,我们不是狗,请不要把我们比做狗。我们是中华人民共和国国民,即使拿
了绿卡我们也还是中国公民,我们应该爱中华人民共和国,而不是美利坚合众国,写我们爱这个国家太猥琐了,人家也不会相信,反而小看我们。

best
But

【在 H******i 的大作中提到】
: Subject: Reform Administrative Procedures for Employment-based Immigration
: Process
: Dear Mr. President,
: If a dog comes to your home, bringing friendship, loyalty, and help, you
: treat him as family. You won’t live with him for many years, but in the
: meanwhile ready to kick him out of your house at any time.
: We come to this country because we love this country, and we can help make
: her better. We want to make this country better because our children are
: growing up here. Our children are growing up here because we spend our best
: years working for this country. We are helpers, friends, and parents. But

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B*e
36
I would choose to quote from Martin Luther King's 'I have a dream' for the
beginning. I don't like the dog part either.

【在 d*****g 的大作中提到】
: My suggestions:
: Delete the dog part.
: Start with "I have a dream", then add your paragraph 2 as the dream.
: then copy H1b from this article "
: If You Care About Immigration, You Should Care About the STAPLE Act"
: The link is below
: http://www.foxnews.com/opinion/2011/05/16/care-immigration-care
: and we are here legal.
: and then the rest of yours.

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H*i
37
本意是说你对狗都做不出来的事情怎么能够对我们做的出来,并不是自比为狗。既然大
家觉得这段话的意思是自比为狗,证明写的不好,希望高手修改。
lxaly的见解与macrosoft类似,是我们第二稿一定要重点突出的内容。但是我现在还没
有这方面的内容,需要大家帮助。请大家用事实告诉我,递交485对美国经济有何建设
性意义。 谢谢!

you

【在 l***y 的大作中提到】
: 我觉得从白宫的思考角度出发比较好,他们不care你是否是人才,不care你是否能帮助
: 美国,美国这个国家历来都是人才拿来当柴烧的,美国有很多talented people 都是不
: 得志的。他们现在弄这么一个请愿的东东不是出于想帮助美国人,更不是想帮助我们。
: 他们要的是从中选取一个题材,作为噢巴马连任时吹牛比的材料。清楚了这个之后,我
: 觉得可以从最近美国经济低迷,就业率低为出发点。结合我们的目的,提出你的先递
: 485的设想,希望板上通晓法律的指点一下,这个先递485的设想是否和移民法有天大的
: 障碍,否则得另寻法门。可以例举几大好处,比如EAD renewal fee--可以增加多少
: 就业机会。拿到EAD卡后,有才能得人出去创业,可以带动经济,增加就业。大家准备
: 买房带动经济。
: 反面得例子,可以说,我现在每年会告诉1000个高科技人才朋友,不要到美国来,you

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H*i
38
I'll delete 爱美利坚合众国, 这句话原本是为了煽情,但是的确猥琐。
我倒真没有把我们比做狗,我的本意是说你对狗都做不出来的事情怎么能够对我们做的
出来,并不是自比为狗。既然大家觉得这段话的意思是自比为狗,证明写的不好,希望
高手修改。

我们爱这个国家太猥琐了,人家也不会相信,反而小看我们。

【在 r********n 的大作中提到】
: 写的太搞笑,我们不是狗,请不要把我们比做狗。我们是中华人民共和国国民,即使拿
: 了绿卡我们也还是中国公民,我们应该爱中华人民共和国,而不是美利坚合众国,写我们爱这个国家太猥琐了,人家也不会相信,反而小看我们。
:
: best
: But

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m*o
39
真是美国的狗比人贵啊
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w*s
40
也请吧那个
we can't choose where we were born.... we should not carry this as our
original sin.
也去掉。
我一点也不觉得生长在中国有什么错误和委屈的。我不觉得这是我的original sin. 这
太小看自己了。如果要是这种论调,很多中国人包括我自己都不能接受。如果有人认为
生长中国是original sin,白宫可以对他们说,你们快去申请政治避难就不用再carray
orignal sin了。
这种都有点大是大非了。一定不能这么写。论调要改。我们是平等的,我们是在请愿。
我们不是丧家犬。我一直的论调是我们是中国人。我们是人才。美国需要我们。没有绿
卡。到任何国家我们都能生存。我们不是什么奴隶,什么柴火。要是我们这么去贬低自
己,我宁可不参加了。
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H*i
41
可见写得仓促了,我自然不觉的这是original sin, 只是外交部按照出生地定quota表
面公平,但是实际上不成比例,也就是有歧视含义在里面。

carray

【在 w**s 的大作中提到】
: 也请吧那个
: we can't choose where we were born.... we should not carry this as our
: original sin.
: 也去掉。
: 我一点也不觉得生长在中国有什么错误和委屈的。我不觉得这是我的original sin. 这
: 太小看自己了。如果要是这种论调,很多中国人包括我自己都不能接受。如果有人认为
: 生长中国是original sin,白宫可以对他们说,你们快去申请政治避难就不用再carray
: orignal sin了。
: 这种都有点大是大非了。一定不能这么写。论调要改。我们是平等的,我们是在请愿。
: 我们不是丧家犬。我一直的论调是我们是中国人。我们是人才。美国需要我们。没有绿

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w*7
43
要写出中国人和美国人都买账的请愿信可不容易,大家继续加油努力啊!
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M*t
44
3x for the information...

【在 d*****g 的大作中提到】
: some numbers below..
: 25.3% of all engineering and technology companies established in the U.S.
: between 1995 and 2005 inclusive had at least one immigrant key founder.
: Together, this pool of immigrant8founded companies was responsible for
: generating more than $52 billion in 2005 sales and creating just under 450,
: 000 jobs as of 2005. (Vivek Wadhwa et.al., 2007) America can’t afford to
: lose this valuable talent
: from the link below
: http://competeamerica.org/sites/default/files/files/Innovation%

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w*r
45
第一段不行,从意思和语法上讲都有些问题。
随便看了两段。第2段中的: But
in the meanwhile we’re ready to be kicked out
应该为:but in the meantime, we have to prepare to be kicked...
想想中文意思就明白了。
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w*r
46
不好意思,我觉得还是不要叫这封信的好,看着难受。就其语言逻辑各方面而言,不认
为能给看信人留下特别好的印象。再说奥巴马忙着连任的事了,不会惹这个事情的。
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l*y
47
walkwater,
如果你觉得这样写不好的话,请你给我们一些实质性的建议。
我希望每个版上跟绿卡有关的人都贡献自己一份力量,切身相关的自然不能推脱,不是
直接相关的可以参与,学习一些经验,如果这个事情最终成功了,也可以成为今后其他
类似请愿事件的模板。我们在考试场上都是佼佼者,找工作的时候也是过五关斩六将,
突破重围却被困在这个绿卡上,心有不甘。但你也没办法,只能不屈不挠的做斗争。
这个时候我们需要团结和鼓励。

【在 w*******r 的大作中提到】
: 不好意思,我觉得还是不要叫这封信的好,看着难受。就其语言逻辑各方面而言,不认
: 为能给看信人留下特别好的印象。再说奥巴马忙着连任的事了,不会惹这个事情的。

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H*i
48
非常感谢您写这么多材料支持我,非常感谢。但是正如我非常辛苦的写了初稿,却非常
乐意接受大家的意见,打回去重写,希望你也能够看得进去我的商榷。
1 您的第一点,包括1.1.1到1.2, 将会授官僚以柄。官僚们会说,我八月二日已经颁布
新政着手解决这个问题
2 您的第二点,我曾经重点做过,见http://www.mitbbs.com/article0/EB23/31394579_0.html
这些是将要做的事情,现在还没有发生,将来可能发生也可能不发生,而且即使没有
EAD也有人能够回国旅游,也有人能够换工作。 我非常同意你的想法,但是我们的对象
是狡猾的官僚
我昨天就吸收了你的第四点,今天在二稿中会更加突出。谢谢!

【在 M*******t 的大作中提到】
: i have more inputs now on the NIU website:
: http://www.niunational.com/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=531&ext

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M*t
49
welcome.
you're right. 2.2. needs to be readdressed or just deleted. to add other
points?
feel free to incorporate the ideas into your letter.
the 1st point, ...

【在 H******i 的大作中提到】
: 非常感谢您写这么多材料支持我,非常感谢。但是正如我非常辛苦的写了初稿,却非常
: 乐意接受大家的意见,打回去重写,希望你也能够看得进去我的商榷。
: 1 您的第一点,包括1.1.1到1.2, 将会授官僚以柄。官僚们会说,我八月二日已经颁布
: 新政着手解决这个问题
: 2 您的第二点,我曾经重点做过,见http://www.mitbbs.com/article0/EB23/31394579_0.html
: 这些是将要做的事情,现在还没有发生,将来可能发生也可能不发生,而且即使没有
: EAD也有人能够回国旅游,也有人能够换工作。 我非常同意你的想法,但是我们的对象
: 是狡猾的官僚
: 我昨天就吸收了你的第四点,今天在二稿中会更加突出。谢谢!

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j*n
50
Support!!!
第一段感觉不是很好,美国人爱狗,但是这种比喻说的我们像宠物一样。
要知道,这个国家多少行业都是靠我们外国技术移民在做的。
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H*i
51
昨晚有事,一点多写的,困得不行。请去二稿多加指点。

【在 w*******r 的大作中提到】
: 第一段不行,从意思和语法上讲都有些问题。
: 随便看了两段。第2段中的: But
: in the meanwhile we’re ready to be kicked out
: 应该为:but in the meantime, we have to prepare to be kicked...
: 想想中文意思就明白了。

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L*s
52
NONE OF PRESIDENT'S BUSINESS...
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C*5
53
第一句就看不下去了。闹了半天我来美国是做狗的?
虽然我知道这是个比喻,也知道美国人喜欢宠物,可是老实说,看了很失望。
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b*t
54
从总体上来说immigrants虽然做出了巨大贡献,但是不能说明现行的制度的负面效应啊
。其中的本质是美国政府想利用这个机制留下想要的,剔除不想要的。我想关键是分析
一下移民制度的变化是不是影响了immigrants的贡献。

【在 d*****g 的大作中提到】
: some numbers below..
: 25.3% of all engineering and technology companies established in the U.S.
: between 1995 and 2005 inclusive had at least one immigrant key founder.
: Together, this pool of immigrant8founded companies was responsible for
: generating more than $52 billion in 2005 sales and creating just under 450,
: 000 jobs as of 2005. (Vivek Wadhwa et.al., 2007) America can’t afford to
: lose this valuable talent
: from the link below
: http://competeamerica.org/sites/default/files/files/Innovation%

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M*8
55
赞同这个
LZ辛苦了,但是狗的比喻实在不太恰当,历史上就有“华人与狗。。。。”
我们的确是在求人,但是据理力争也比自轻自贱要好

【在 d*****g 的大作中提到】
: My suggestions:
: Delete the dog part.
: Start with "I have a dream", then add your paragraph 2 as the dream.
: then copy H1b from this article "
: If You Care About Immigration, You Should Care About the STAPLE Act"
: The link is below
: http://www.foxnews.com/opinion/2011/05/16/care-immigration-care
: and we are here legal.
: and then the rest of yours.

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j*1
56
初稿删了吧!
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