very very nice! also, I really like this song.
I agree that ZhangSan improved a lot recently!!!
I like Main part more.
Fu Ge part is a little bit out of your control, otherwise you can express
more of the feeling.
I think you were hesitating when you face the high pitch.
it's better to use the air, not shouting, but the most important thing you
have the courage to sing it, even with a bit shout.
any way, congratulations!!!
also you can try Gao Yuan Hong!!!