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人类历史上最伟大的10本书 (转载)

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g*i2011-08-29 07:08

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RD 6/23, RFE 7/6 by #XM1155. Claim Authorship + Performing a Critical Role +
Contribution. Authorship 和 Contribution 过了，Critical Role 没过。
BACKGROUND: 船舶工程美国PHD;PHD毕业后在一家中小型船厂做SENIOR NAVAL
ARCHITECT，为此船厂设计了一个浮船坞，并用此浮船坞将该厂建造的美国历史上最大
豪华游艇送下水。
IO承认了我的浮船坞及LAUNCH豪华游艇的 CONTRIBUTIONS，但没认我由此CLAIM的在该
厂Performing a Critical Role, 让提交证据，RFE信上这样写的：
To assist in derterming that the beneficiary has performed in a leading or
critical role for xxx shipyards, the petitioner may submit:
Letters from current or former employer(s) or trainer(s) with personal
knowledge of the significance of the beneficiary's leading or critical role:
1, the letters should contain detailed and probative information that
specially addresses how the beneficiary's role for the organization is or
was leading or critical. Details should include the specific tasks or
accomplishments of the beneficiary as compared to others who are employed in
similar pursuits within the field of endeavor; and
2, The letters should include the name, address,and title of the writer.
工科实在不好在CITATION和REVIEW上比，又是“三无”人员，幸运被船厂OWNER兼
PRESIDENT重用，才得以CLAIM三条。在本版潜水三余月，也没见有走Critical Role的
，无奈当回“出头鸟”！
我的求助问题是：
1）这个Letter from employer是不是指现任的能代表船厂的高级管理人员写的信，比
如已跳槽的工程部MANAGER写是不是不行？HR头写，行不行？
2）其实我附有OWNER兼PRESIDENT的这样的推荐信，IO应该是没时间而漏看。因他的信
还兼顾我的CONTRIBUTION,没有与同行比较（compared to others who are employed
in similar pursuits），可不可以重提交一封他的针对以上内容的LETTER OF SUPPORT?
希望大家给给建议、主意。谢了先！
并期望此次能投石问路，为广大工科EB1A有志者辟条别路。

d*y2011-08-29 07:08

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最近打算和同学去水上乐园玩玩，但不知道哪里的比较适合成年人玩的。最好能地方能
大点，有些刺激点的游乐设施，呵呵，就是不会游泳就不能去玩的那种。
我就知道SIX FLAG有一个水上乐园，不过没去过，看起来好像很小。
san diego的sea world那边不知道怎么样。
还有没有别的地方，请达人推荐呀，采纳答案者，包子伺候

d*f2011-08-29 07:08

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【以下文字转载自 WaterWorld 讨论区】
发信人: LAOXlNG (老邢), 信区: WaterWorld
标题: 人类历史上最伟大的10本书 (转载)
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Mon Aug 29 14:17:56 2011, 美东)
发信人: LAOXlNG (老邢), 信区: Military
标题: 人类历史上最伟大的10本书
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Mon Aug 29 14:17:27 2011, 美东)
大家看看，有什么感受？你读过几本？

Anna Karenina by Leo Tolstoy
Madame Bovary by Gustave Flaubert
War and Peace by Leo Tolstoy
Lolita by Vladimir Nabokov
The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain
Hamlet by William Shakespeare
The Great Gatsby F. Scott Fitzgerald
In Search of Lost Time by Marcel Proust
The Stories of Anton Chekhov by Anton Chekhov
Middlemarch by George Eliot
http://www.time.com/time/arts/article/0,8599,1578073,00.html
惊诧：
1。没有红楼梦，没有金庸，也没有金瓶梅。
2。苏联第一，美国第二。只有欧美，没有东方。
3。没有圣经。

f*D2011-08-29 07:08

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弱问，为什么要claim critical role?

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【在 g*****i 的大作中提到】

: RD 6/23, RFE 7/6 by #XM1155. Claim Authorship + Performing a Critical Role +
: Contribution. Authorship 和 Contribution 过了，Critical Role 没过。
: BACKGROUND: 船舶工程美国PHD;PHD毕业后在一家中小型船厂做SENIOR NAVAL
: ARCHITECT，为此船厂设计了一个浮船坞，并用此浮船坞将该厂建造的美国历史上最大
: 豪华游艇送下水。
: IO承认了我的浮船坞及LAUNCH豪华游艇的 CONTRIBUTIONS，但没认我由此CLAIM的在该
: 厂Performing a Critical Role, 让提交证据，RFE信上这样写的：
: To assist in derterming that the beneficiary has performed in a leading or
: critical role for xxx shipyards, the petitioner may submit:
: Letters from current or former employer(s) or trainer(s) with personal

h*n2011-08-29 07:08

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sea world是个水族馆。
我没去过水上乐园，所以没办法推荐。

B*r2011-08-29 07:08

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文化差异嘛。
应该全人类投票。

T*y2011-08-29 07:08

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He explained that
"工科实在不好在CITATION和REVIEW上比，又是“三无”人员，幸运被船厂OWNER兼
PRESIDENT重用，才得以CLAIM三条。"

【在 f****D 的大作中提到】

: 弱问，为什么要claim critical role?
:
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T*T2011-08-29 07:08

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raging water 关了没？

y*g2011-08-29 07:08

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没有毛主席语录
一本也没看过

T*y2011-08-29 07:08

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I am still preparing for my 140, so take what I say with a grain of
salt.

It's better to be written by a person in your current company, best yet
by your bosses, direct or indirect. The higher rank the boss, the more
convincing your critical role.
The manager who has left your company does not seem to be convincing,
even less so is the HR.
If you could get two or more letters, then you could probably include
the one from that manager who has left your company to prove your
historical contribution, but it alone is not enough, IMHO.
It often happens that an RFE is issued in the last minute for a PP case,
when they don't have enough time to look into the portfolios.
Given your timeline: RD 6/23, RFE 7/6, your case might be one of those,
so you don't need to worry too much about this RFE. If you could answer
it properly, there's a good chance of approval.
SUPPORT?
For other RFEs with the typical three claims, people often submit
"independent" letters from "new" references.
Enriching the old letter sounds a bit unconvincing since if the
reference could say more, why didn't he say it earlier?
In your case, your critical role is best evidenced by your bosses, or
maybe some major clients, so the new references are not independent, and
they are rightly so. You may emphasize the old letter in the RFE, but
try to get two or more new letters from another boss or another major
client. Another boss's letter from within you company is the most
important one.
The RFE instructions are very clear IMHO, and you may want to write
about the tasks you've accomplished with enough details and show that
you in the top of your field with comparison.
One last tip: as I saw on this board, the RFE may not be reviewed by the
same officer who issued your RFE, and hence you need to re-package your
whole RFE response even more glamorously, with to-the-point responses,
and restating all your claims with evidences. It's like re-writing the
PL.
Best wishes to you!

【在 g*****i 的大作中提到】

s*s2011-08-29 07:08

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Raging Waters

g*w2011-08-29 07:08

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all russian bull shit.

T*y2011-08-29 07:08

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SUPPORT?
I thought again about from whom you could get more letters, given that your
old letter is from the president of your company.
You may get a new letter from him again, since he's still the best candidate
to support your claim.
Apart from that, is there some organization in the industry of your company
that governs or chooses proposals from competing companies? If you could get
a letter from the management of that organization to say that your company
is the best of that industry, and your role in your company is indispensable
with details of the tasks you've done, then that may be a good option.
Also, if you could get a lower-ranked boss's letter, but s/he knows your
work very well, so s/he could write all the details about your work, that
might be an option as well.
Another option might be from some other departments in your company who have
used your work in some way. They can say that "If without your work, their
task can not continue." That makes your work sound critical, right?
Best wishes to you!

【在 g*****i 的大作中提到】

h*d2011-08-29 07:08

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试试Wild River
http://www.wildrivers.com/

【在 d*****y 的大作中提到】

: 最近打算和同学去水上乐园玩玩，但不知道哪里的比较适合成年人玩的。最好能地方能
: 大点，有些刺激点的游乐设施，呵呵，就是不会游泳就不能去玩的那种。
: 我就知道SIX FLAG有一个水上乐园，不过没去过，看起来好像很小。
: san diego的sea world那边不知道怎么样。
: 还有没有别的地方，请达人推荐呀，采纳答案者，包子伺候

b*r2011-08-29 07:08

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bless. difficult to claim critical role.

h*62011-08-29 07:08

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南加不知道，北加据说有个金门大桥比较刺激。。。

【在 d*****y 的大作中提到】

g*i2011-08-29 07:08

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Thank you very much, TrueStory!
All your suggestions are reasonable. The Engineering Manager was my boss,
then he jumped, the President became my direct boss. I will contact the
President and the Project Manager to see if I can two more letters.
Bless on your 140. It's a lot of work!!

employed
your
candidate
company
get

【在 T*******y 的大作中提到】

:
: SUPPORT?
: I thought again about from whom you could get more letters, given that your
: old letter is from the president of your company.
: You may get a new letter from him again, since he's still the best candidate
: to support your claim.
: Apart from that, is there some organization in the industry of your company
: that governs or chooses proposals from competing companies? If you could get
: a letter from the management of that organization to say that your company
: is the best of that industry, and your role in your company is indispensable

x*i2011-08-29 07:08

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Knotts Berry farm 的 Soak City,上周刚去过。挺好玩的，就是也不大

o*y2011-08-29 07:08

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我觉得Owner + president再写一封信就好了。RFE信里要求写得很具体，这个应该不难
，如果能说明你是项目领头人，手下supervise多少人，你的职责是什么，具体做了哪
些别人不能代替的工作。强调一下没有grantqi屠夫，就要吃混毛猪，我看就差
不多了。

s*s2011-08-29 07:08

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Just try Raging Waters in San Dimas

g*i2011-08-29 07:08

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UPDATE!

k*e2011-08-29 07:08

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l*22011-08-29 07:08

23 楼

GXGX!
Baozi

H*72011-08-29 07:08

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很牛！恭喜！

R*s2011-08-29 07:08

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Cong!

09.
TrueStory and Oany for suggesting on my RFE.
role) if you have a good relationship with your employer and your school
lab. The key is the criterion v (contributions) must be strong (engineering
achievements usually are physically existing, so you can work on them and
make them strong). Then basing on the contributions you can let your advisor
(s), professors, managers, co-workers write Letters of Support saying how
critical the role you performed in the organization: is. Notice: 1)by the
plain languge of the USCIS criterion, you have to perform critical role in
AT LEAST TWO ORGANIZATIONS (i.e. your lab and your employer). 2) It is
identically important that the organizations have a distinguished reputation
. This part is easier: usually your Phd lab is distinguished in a way in the
US; An employer employing Phds is famous in the US. But you must show to
USCIS.
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【在 g*****i 的大作中提到】

: UPDATE!

n*y2011-08-29 07:08

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cong!

09.
TrueStory and Oany for suggesting on my RFE.
role) if you have a good relationship with your employer and your school
lab. The key is the criterion v (contributions) must be strong (engineering
achievements usually are physically existing, so you can work on them and
make them strong). Then basing on the contributions you can let your advisor
(s), professors, managers, co-workers write Letters of Support saying how
critical the role you performed in the organization: is. Notice: 1)by the
plain languge of the USCIS criterion, you have to perform critical role in
AT LEAST TWO ORGANIZATIONS (i.e. your lab and your employer). 2) It is
identically important that the organizations have a distinguished reputation
. This part is easier: usually your Phd lab is distinguished in a way in the
US; An employer employing Phds is famous in the US. But you must show to
USCIS.
+

【在 g*****i 的大作中提到】

: UPDATE!

s*a2011-08-29 07:08

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cong

09.
TrueStory and Oany for suggesting on my RFE.
role) if you have a good relationship with your employer and your school
lab. The key is the criterion v (contributions) must be strong (engineering
achievements usually are physically existing, so you can work on them and
make them strong). Then basing on the contributions you can let your advisor
(s), professors, managers, co-workers write Letters of Support saying how
critical the role you performed in the organization: is. Notice: 1)by the
plain languge of the USCIS criterion, you have to perform critical role in
AT LEAST TWO ORGANIZATIONS (i.e. your lab and your employer). 2) It is
identically important that the organizations have a distinguished reputation
. This part is easier: usually your Phd lab is distinguished in a way in the
US; An employer employing Phds is famous in the US. But you must show to
USCIS.
+

【在 g*****i 的大作中提到】

: UPDATE!

b*y2011-08-29 07:08

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祝贺祝贺。这个牛！：）

【在 g*****i 的大作中提到】

: UPDATE!

l*t2011-08-29 07:08

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cong!

发信人: grantqi (grantqi), 信区: Immigration
标题: APPROVED!!!--RFE求助：EB1A 140 PP DIY TSC ( Critical Role问题）
关键字: EB1a,Critical role
发信站: BBS 未名空间站 (Wed Jul 13 01:31:51 2011, 美东)
Just got the email approval notice! RFE received on 08/01, approved on 08/09.
Thanks to all the people sharing information in this forum. Thanks to
TrueStory and Oany for suggesting on my RFE.
My experience: Engineeering EB1A DIYers can claim criterion viii (critical
role) if you have a good relationship with your employer and your school lab
. The key is the criterion v (contributions) must be strong (engineering
achievements usually are physically existing, so you can work on them and
make them strong). Then basing on the contributions you can let your advisor
(s), professors, managers, co-workers write Letters of Support saying how
critical the role you performed in the organization is. Notice: 1)by the
plain languge of the USCIS criterion, you have to perform critical role in
AT LEAST TWO ORGANIZATIONS (i.e. your lab and your employer). 2) It is
identically important that the organizations have a distinguished reputation
. This part is easier: usually your Phd lab is distinguished in a way in the
US; An employer employing Phds is famous in the US. But you must show to
USCIS.
最后，祝不好在CITATION和REVIEW上比的工科“三无”人员不再长期等排期！
***************************************************************************
RD 6/23, RFE 7/6 by #XM1155. Claim Authorship + Performing a Critical Role +
Contribution. Authorship 和 Contribution 过了，Critical Role 没过。
BACKGROUND: 船舶工程美国PHD;PHD毕业后在一家中小型船厂做SENIOR NAVAL
ARCHITECT，为此船厂设计了一个浮船坞，并用此浮船坞将该厂建造的美国历史上最大
豪华游艇送下水。
IO承认了我的浮船坞及LAUNCH豪华游艇的 CONTRIBUTIONS，但没认我由此CLAIM的在该
厂Performing a Critical Role, 让提交证据，RFE信上这样写的：
To assist in derterming that the beneficiary has performed in a leading or
critical role for xxx shipyards, the petitioner may submit:
Letters from current or former employer(s) or trainer(s) with personal
knowledge of the significance of the beneficiary's leading or critical role:
1, the letters should contain detailed and probative information that
specially addresses how the beneficiary's role for the organization is or
was leading or critical. Details should include the specific tasks or
accomplishments of the beneficiary as compared to others who are employed in
similar pursuits within the field of endeavor; and
2, The letters should include the name, address,and title of the writer.
工科实在不好在CITATION和REVIEW上比，又是“三无”人员，幸运被船厂OWNER兼
PRESIDENT重用，才得以CLAIM三条。在本版潜水三余月，也没见有走Critical Role的
，无奈当回“出头鸟”！
我的求助问题是：
1）这个Letter from employer是不是指现任的能代表船厂的高级管理人员写的信，比
如已跳槽的工程部MANAGER写是不是不行？HR头写，行不行？
2）其实我附有OWNER兼PRESIDENT的这样的推荐信，IO应该是没时间而漏看。因他的信
还兼顾我的CONTRIBUTION,没有与同行比较（compared to others who are employed
in similar pursuits），可不可以重提交一封他的针对以上内容的LETTER OF SUPPORT?
希望大家给给建议、主意。谢了先！
并期望此次能投石问路，为广大工科EB1A有志者辟条别路。

【在 g*****i 的大作中提到】

: UPDATE!

T*y2011-08-29 07:08

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Hi, I am so happy that your case is approved!
Big big Cong and best wishes for your future!