请帮助看看我的qualification: 多谢!! • Mechanical engineer with multi-disciplinary background. • Knowledgeable of the process of product development from conceptual design to product release. • Significant experience in design, development, test, evaluation and failure analysis. • Familiar with manufacturing equipments, process and DFM. • Expertise in finite element analysis (linear and nonlinear). • Proficient in solid modeling, and geometric dimen
楼主请帮我看一下qulification.多谢。 Highly self-motivated and diligent problem solver and efficient learner with strong analytical skills. Diverse experiences in mechanical design and development, material modeling and simulation, software development, and numerical analysis. All-around mechanical and mechanics knowledge with outstanding academic performances. Dual Bachelor degrees in mechanical engineering and computer science. 另外,如果就这样,下面不再列像楼上那样的bulletin,行不行?我是PhD,最后一句 是否有必要? 谢谢。
a*8
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有道理!
【在 s****r 的大作中提到】 : 人家猫粮就是这么设计的,就怕你偷吃
c*d
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【在 z**0 的大作中提到】 : You mean all apps for phones will work full screen? : Does advanced browser and youku from 3.0.2 still work?
s*7
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看下我的吧 (part) xxxx (name) address: Cell: Email: OBJECTIVE To obtain a position where I can effectively utilize my semiconductor knowledge and skills to make a positive contribution to the company EDUCATION Education Experience Master of Science in Electrical Engineering (GPA: 3.68/4.0 Aug 2010) Department of Electrical Engineering, University of x, Focus: III-V Semiconductor Devices Fabrication and Testing Bachelor of Science in Electrical Engineering
m*j
21 楼
我吃过不好吃。 没办法呀,他们又不能吃这,又不能吃那的,最后DRY FOOD肯定没味道的。
c*d
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I mean youth works great, no screen cut anymore
【在 z**0 的大作中提到】 : You mean all apps for phones will work full screen? : Does advanced browser and youku from 3.0.2 still work?
Lz没在,我看到了就说说,不专业,见笑. "Highly self-motivated and diligent"这个形容词没有语法上的错误,但是不太符合 语言习惯.因为and两端的词应该是形式相近的。self-motivated和result-oriented. diligent和professional。类似这个意思。
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【在 s*******e 的大作中提到】 : 楼主请帮我看一下qulification.多谢。 : Highly self-motivated and diligent problem solver and efficient learner with : strong analytical skills. Diverse experiences in mechanical design and : development, material modeling and simulation, software development, and : numerical analysis. All-around mechanical and mechanics knowledge with : outstanding academic performances. Dual Bachelor degrees in mechanical : engineering and computer science. : 另外,如果就这样,下面不再列像楼上那样的bulletin,行不行?我是PhD,最后一句 : 是否有必要? : 谢谢。
楼主真是热心人~ 帮俺看看Qualifications好吗?谢谢! Self-motivated and results-oriented Senior Scientist experienced in environmental microbiology, microbial physiology, molecular biology and biotechnology. Solid background and excellent hands-on skills on discovering of microorganisms for biodegradation and biocontrol. Be good at designing experiments and working independently, multi-tasks management and team- working.
【在 m****e 的大作中提到】 : 回shamrocks: : 整体挺好的。第三句把开始的"Be"去掉。最好把good at 也换掉,有点不痛不痒。第一 : 句的"experienced"可以考虑换成"with xxx years of experience".
b*n
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我自己给狗做饭的原因之一,就是再也受不了商品粮的气味了,实在是受不了
【在 q**u 的大作中提到】 : 没尝过宠物干粮或饼干的不算好主人。呵呵
w*g
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Please comment on my resume: EXPERIENCE Auditor Principal Aug. 2007 — Jul. 2009 ******** audit department ****city, China
•Served as Auditor-in-Charge in four projects with overall revenue (budget) about $** million. •Coordinated up to 5 auditors: assigned tasks, recommended improvements based on audit working paper, streamlined audit processes and controlled schedule. •Two projects honored national excellence for high quality; saved 10% cost by reducing au
z*e
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干粮和罐头,闻上去都挺香的,尝起来都没什么味道。个人感觉干粮比较好接受一点。
m*e
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我记得几天前给你回过信了。。。奇怪,没发到? 几点意见供你参考: 1. skills 可以考虑提到experience 前面,activity 好像没必要。 2. education里mba下面的内容挪到experience里,title是graduate research assistance, 关于fellowship和GPA的内容可以省略掉。 3. experience里用词不够有力。比如第一点可以改成“led auditing teams of four projects with combined revenue of $$$ million". 4. 还是experience: 感觉你做过很多东西,但是没留下太多的关于结果的印象。比如 你说的“improved cooperation...",具体结果表现在哪儿?如果你能想办法列出一些 数字会有说服力的多。 5. 04-07年的经历能不能压缩到4-5条?07-09年的已经有六七条了。 6. 我觉得你多强调你有处理international business的经验可能会比较吸引眼球一些 。
b*l
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我买过的猫干粮我都吃过,都不咋好吃,相对味道淡一点的还好些~~
w*g
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多谢Mudane,是没有收到你的回信。 你是说吧skills用一两句话概括作为summary?
s*s
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楼主请查收站内短信,谢谢!
four
【在 m****e 的大作中提到】 : 我记得几天前给你回过信了。。。奇怪,没发到? : 几点意见供你参考: : 1. skills 可以考虑提到experience 前面,activity 好像没必要。 : 2. education里mba下面的内容挪到experience里,title是graduate research : assistance, 关于fellowship和GPA的内容可以省略掉。 : 3. experience里用词不够有力。比如第一点可以改成“led auditing teams of four : projects with combined revenue of $$$ million". : 4. 还是experience: 感觉你做过很多东西,但是没留下太多的关于结果的印象。比如 : 你说的“improved cooperation...",具体结果表现在哪儿?如果你能想办法列出一些 : 数字会有说服力的多。
mudane可否帮忙看看这一段: Dynamic and creative professional with solid theoretical knowledge in chemistry & chemical engineering. More than *** years of hands-on experience in organic, organometallic, inorganic, catalytic and analytical chemistry. In-depth knowledge of process optimization for creating novel compounds. *** years of hands-on multi-step organic, organometallic synthesis, purification and characterization in asymmetric catalysis. More than *** years of hands-on cultivated expertise in analy
n*t
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在这儿撞上了~呵呵
experience . **
【在 l******5 的大作中提到】 : mudane可否帮忙看看这一段: : Dynamic and creative professional with solid theoretical knowledge in : chemistry & chemical engineering. More than *** years of hands-on experience : in organic, organometallic, inorganic, catalytic and analytical chemistry. : In-depth knowledge of process optimization for creating novel compounds. *** : years of hands-on multi-step organic, organometallic synthesis, : purification and characterization in asymmetric catalysis. More than *** : years of hands-on cultivated expertise in analy
m*e
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it is probably better to move "hands-on experience" ahead of theoretical knowledge if you are looking for an industry job (my field is not in Chem/ ChemE so if the common practice is to focus on theory ignore my suggestion). you might want to shorten the paragraph a little bit and move all the different fields (organic etc) into a short list immediately after the paragraph (sort of like a "skills" section but still part of the qualification)
experience . **
【在 l******5 的大作中提到】 : mudane可否帮忙看看这一段: : Dynamic and creative professional with solid theoretical knowledge in : chemistry & chemical engineering. More than *** years of hands-on experience : in organic, organometallic, inorganic, catalytic and analytical chemistry. : In-depth knowledge of process optimization for creating novel compounds. *** : years of hands-on multi-step organic, organometallic synthesis, : purification and characterization in asymmetric catalysis. More than *** : years of hands-on cultivated expertise in analy
l*5
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many thanks
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【在 m****e 的大作中提到】 : it is probably better to move "hands-on experience" ahead of theoretical : knowledge if you are looking for an industry job (my field is not in Chem/ : ChemE so if the common practice is to focus on theory ignore my suggestion). : you might want to shorten the paragraph a little bit and move all the : different fields (organic etc) into a short list immediately after the : paragraph (sort of like a "skills" section but still part of the : qualification) : : experience : .
我市学生,没工作经历。请问在experience里根老板做得project title是research assistant,那么做过的course project title 应该写什么比较好呢?谢谢
four
【在 m****e 的大作中提到】 : 我记得几天前给你回过信了。。。奇怪,没发到? : 几点意见供你参考: : 1. skills 可以考虑提到experience 前面,activity 好像没必要。 : 2. education里mba下面的内容挪到experience里,title是graduate research : assistance, 关于fellowship和GPA的内容可以省略掉。 : 3. experience里用词不够有力。比如第一点可以改成“led auditing teams of four : projects with combined revenue of $$$ million". : 4. 还是experience: 感觉你做过很多东西,但是没留下太多的关于结果的印象。比如 : 你说的“improved cooperation...",具体结果表现在哪儿?如果你能想办法列出一些 : 数字会有说服力的多。
m*s
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麻烦你看看下面的简历,并请不吝赐教。 EDUCATION xxx University School of Engineering, Physics department Master of Science in physics, GPA (3.9/4.0)
PhD in Physics Expected December, 2010 xxx University, China Bachelor of Science, Physics RESEARCH EXPERIENCE XXX National Lab 2007 - 2010 Research Assistant • Worked in large international collaborations as well as conducted
m*e
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put everything under your RA experience should be okay. by the way, I generally do not recommend puting course projects in your resume unless you can convince people that you went beyond the scope of the course. some comment copied from my blog (www.randommumble.blogspot.com) 另外一个问题:对学生而言,列什么项目?很简单,所有和专业相关的,只有不是那么 课的学期论文,都可以列,哪怕是你只给老板帮忙了一个星期。为什么不列学期论文? 原因是为未来的面试未雨绸缪:万一被问出来是学期论文,你想问你的人郁闷不郁闷? (既然问你,自然是对那个项目有兴趣了) 当然凡事都不是绝对的(impossible is nothing, 呵呵),如果你实在想列,也不是 完全不能,只是要慎重,做好被穷追猛打的准备。学期论文的问题主要有两个:1
【在 g*****1 的大作中提到】 : 我市学生,没工作经历。请问在experience里根老板做得project title是research : assistant,那么做过的course project title 应该写什么比较好呢?谢谢 : : four
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请帮我看看我的简历,有什么需要改进的。 多谢。
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请帮忙看一下我的简历吧,谢谢
, 拿出10%去帮助
【在 m****e 的大作中提到】 : put everything under your RA experience should be okay. : by the way, I generally do not recommend puting course projects in your : resume unless you can convince people that you went beyond the scope of the : course. : some comment copied from my blog (www.randommumble.blogspot.com) : 另外一个问题:对学生而言,列什么项目?很简单,所有和专业相关的,只有不是那么 : 课的学期论文,都可以列,哪怕是你只给老板帮忙了一个星期。为什么不列学期论文? : 原因是为未来的面试未雨绸缪:万一被问出来是学期论文,你想问你的人郁闷不郁闷? : (既然问你,自然是对那个项目有兴趣了) : 当然凡事都不是绝对的(impossible is nothing, 呵呵),如果你实在想列,也不是
e*n
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俺只是本科毕业。。。。毕业快半年了都没找到工作。。。。
e*n
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帮我看看?
OBJECTIVE Seeking a permanent and full time mechanical engineering position where my knowledge in fluid mechanics, alternate energy systems, power plant reactors, shock/vibration analysis, and thermal analysis can be applied. EDUCATION xx University School of Engineering Graduation Date: May 2010 Major: Bachelor of Science in Mechanical Engineering with an Energy System Concentration GPA: 3.0 EXPERIENCE Missiles Launch Research Rutgers, Department of MAE Piscataway, NJ August 2009 – May 2010 Advised by Professor Doyle Knight, Director of Centre for Computational Design in the Mechanical & Aerospace Department (MAE) Study of missile launching using Missile DATCOM, a program that provides the outputs of the missile aerodynamic and performance under various given conditions. Determine optimal guidance law parameters for pursuit of a supersonic vehicle engaged in evasive maneuvers. Completed reports of five missiles, including their basic geometry and aerodynamic performance. Graphs were created using MatLab for analysis. Micro Aircraft Design Rutgers, Department of MAE Piscataway, NJ September 2009 – May 2010 Together with a five member team, designed and fabricated a remote control air-vehicle with a maximum endurance of less than 100 grams, given a $500 budget constraint. Successfully completed and presented the design before the project deadline. CAD Project Rutgers Course – CAD in Mechanical Engineering September 2008 – December 2008 Assembled an electrical hand drill using ProEngineer. Mainly focused on the case of the hand drill and created over 100 datum planes due to the irregular shape of the case. Sales Associate Barnes & Noble New Brunswick, NJ August 2007 – October 2009 Processed customer orders, handled cash register, and dealt with customers on a one-to-one basis. Additional tasks included stocking inventories as well as the opening and closing of the store. ACTIVITIES Member of Phi Sigma Rho September 2008 – January 2010 Active member through various fundraising activities TECHNICAL SKILLS Fluent Languages: English, Chinese – Mandarin Proficient in Microsoft Office, Matlab, ProEngineer, Solidwork, Maple Experience with Windows 95-Window 7, Mac OS X
a*m
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帮忙看看这一段, 谢谢! PROFESSIONAL OVERVIEW Self-motivated and results-oriented Senior Scientist with 10 years of experience in biomedical field and 4 years in Statistics, Bioinformatics. Solid interdisciplinary background and excellent hands-on skills on data mining and experimental design. Passionate to leverage quantitative, programming and analytical skills to provide new insight to clinical and biomedical study. • Distinguished academic background in Genetics, Physiology, and Applied Statistics. • Experienced in high dimensional data analysis: Genetic Algorithm, Principal component analysis, Discrimiant analysis and Logistical regression . • Ability to code statistical methods using programming languages and packages. • Success working within an interdisciplinary environment.
Ph.D Candidate in the ** department, ** University, 2009 – 2010(dropped)
y*4
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请您帮忙看看我的简历,能给我写建议!谢谢!
, 拿出10%去帮助
【在 m****e 的大作中提到】 : put everything under your RA experience should be okay. : by the way, I generally do not recommend puting course projects in your : resume unless you can convince people that you went beyond the scope of the : course. : some comment copied from my blog (www.randommumble.blogspot.com) : 另外一个问题:对学生而言,列什么项目?很简单,所有和专业相关的,只有不是那么 : 课的学期论文,都可以列,哪怕是你只给老板帮忙了一个星期。为什么不列学期论文? : 原因是为未来的面试未雨绸缪:万一被问出来是学期论文,你想问你的人郁闷不郁闷? : (既然问你,自然是对那个项目有兴趣了) : 当然凡事都不是绝对的(impossible is nothing, 呵呵),如果你实在想列,也不是
【在 m****e 的大作中提到】 : put everything under your RA experience should be okay. : by the way, I generally do not recommend puting course projects in your : resume unless you can convince people that you went beyond the scope of the : course. : some comment copied from my blog (www.randommumble.blogspot.com) : 另外一个问题:对学生而言,列什么项目?很简单,所有和专业相关的,只有不是那么 : 课的学期论文,都可以列,哪怕是你只给老板帮忙了一个星期。为什么不列学期论文? : 原因是为未来的面试未雨绸缪:万一被问出来是学期论文,你想问你的人郁闷不郁闷? : (既然问你,自然是对那个项目有兴趣了) : 当然凡事都不是绝对的(impossible is nothing, 呵呵),如果你实在想列,也不是
my 2c for happymermaid (bearing in mind that I'm not a CS major so I could be wrong) -- 1. what you are look for is too vague. there are too many subfields as a software engineer so you will have to be specific about what kind of software work you want to do (e.g., web-app development, database, etc) 2. (I'm guessing) hands-on experience is much more important for software work. so, try to put more emphasis on your projects (no matter how small they are). move the project stuff in your education to experience; 3. overall your resume is not punchy. (at least for me) it does not leave a strong impression of what you are good at. 4. do not leave a gap. you never know if your past experience would be of interest to someone... slightly off topic, if I were you I'd look for jobs that involves both software (your CS background) and hardware (EE). This is your niche area and it is what distinguishes you from the 'regular' CS or EE majors. good luck.
m*e
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to wenbichang -- generally no need to list your publications unless you are looking for a ( dead-serious) R&D job...