七律---梦觉咏月 Ode to the Moon

七律---梦觉咏月 Ode to the Moon

中秋昨夜挂银盆 The Mid-Autumn Moon in sky's like a silver plate,
恰似当年主义真 Resembling communism we used to advocate.
缈缈清辉涤宇宙 Its light seems to beam on the entire universe.
斑斑坑穴布全身 Its surface's all covered by numerous craters.
才承日曝灼皮肉 It's scorched by the relentless sun during the day.
又著阴寒冻命根 It's frozen like hell when it goes the other way.
大气不曾屏汝障 It is never protected by an atmosphere,
流星随意注天恩 But raped repeatedly by many a meteor.

这是去年写的。很久不写古体诗了，这可以说是写着玩而已。见到南兄呼唤，来凑个热闹。