嘻嘻，不梦想了# ChineseClassics - 中华古典文化
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继续诌我的《南柯梦》。
玉茗新池雨，金柅小阁晴。有情歌酒莫教停，看取无情虫蚁，也关情。
国土阴中起，风花眼角成。契玄还有讲残经。为问东风吹梦，几时醒？
手上这本英译的，实在不算好，许多地方觉得夹生，比如开头这支：
A shower has bathed Camellia Hall;
Sunshine now brightens Checkrein Bower.
Let sensuous wine and songs forever flow,
And watch insensate insects busy themselves.
Their story might make sense.
A kingdom rises in the shadows;
Out of the corner of the eye.
A romance unfolds as the preaching goes.
When will the eastern wind of spring
Sweep away the dream?
什么叫做"their story might make sense"？很不ma
玉茗新池雨，金柅小阁晴。有情歌酒莫教停，看取无情虫蚁，也关情。
国土阴中起，风花眼角成。契玄还有讲残经。为问东风吹梦，几时醒？
手上这本英译的，实在不算好，许多地方觉得夹生，比如开头这支：
A shower has bathed Camellia Hall;
Sunshine now brightens Checkrein Bower.
Let sensuous wine and songs forever flow,
And watch insensate insects busy themselves.
Their story might make sense.
A kingdom rises in the shadows;
Out of the corner of the eye.
A romance unfolds as the preaching goes.
When will the eastern wind of spring
Sweep away the dream?
什么叫做"their story might make sense"？很不ma