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Maple leaves on the wall
In the spring, you bid farewell to me for the north,
for the snow that has not melted yet.
Leave me facing the silent wall,
on which you painted flaming maple leaves
that cling to the twigs in the autumn wind.
You adjure me time and again-
Come to me,
when the maple leaves fall off the wall and cover your palms.
© 26 minutes ago, xx love
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Autorank: Total 7.9, professional similarity 5 (of 10), concrete vs abstract
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墙上的枫叶
春天里你告别我去北方
为了还没融化的雪
留下我面对无语的墙
你画满了火红的枫叶
在秋风里握紧树梢
你反复地叮嘱-
来找我吧
当墙上的枫叶落满你的手掌
In the spring, you bid farewell to me for the north,
for the snow that has not melted yet.
Leave me facing the silent wall,
on which you painted flaming maple leaves
that cling to the twigs in the autumn wind.
You adjure me time and again-
Come to me,
when the maple leaves fall off the wall and cover your palms.
© 26 minutes ago, xx love
Like (0) 0
Autorank: Total 7.9, professional similarity 5 (of 10), concrete vs abstract
2 (of 2), noun/verb/etc order 1 (of 1), too many capitalized -0.1 (of -1)
墙上的枫叶
春天里你告别我去北方
为了还没融化的雪
留下我面对无语的墙
你画满了火红的枫叶
在秋风里握紧树梢
你反复地叮嘱-
来找我吧
当墙上的枫叶落满你的手掌
