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第一次写邀请信，求建议，另有若干问题。
写得有点长，不过还在一页以内，主要突出一些强点，不知道还能不能压缩。
1）第二段我想加一句：By the way, my father studied and worked in Japan for
three years in 1980s. 感觉离题，但觉得也可以侧面证明他没有移民离开中国的倾向
，大家怎么看。
2）关于第四段，都说孩子出费用不好，那他们自己出所有的钱，这样好不好，反正确
实他们有钱。我们还要不要bank statement（要不要去银行开，还是打印）。
3）第四段写旅行计划，有没有多余。
4）第五段我抄了前人2句，但事实他们退休金只有2000多和1000多，在二线城市还可以
，不知道签证官怎么看。
5）第五段，我外公是由女儿轮休照顾，take care in turn这句话有没有意义？还是要
怎么说？
Dear Visa Officer,
My name is **, a PhD candidate at **. I am writing this letter to invite my
parents, ** and **, to visit U.S. for traveling and family reunion.
My father retired in late 2011, and my mother retired in 2001. They began
travelling around the world. They went to South Korea last year and
Australia early this year. I want to invite them to U.S. They also have
their plan to Europe in 2014.
I went back to China twice during the last three years, to stay with them
for one month each time. However, I will work on PhD thesis in the next two
years, and cannot spend a consecutive vocation with them in China. So I want
to have this opportunity for family reunion.
They will support all their expenses, such as round-trip flight, insurance
and tourism in US. They plan to go to US in April for 6 months, which is the
best season in NY. We will take them to New York City in the weekends and
let them join the tour groups such as 10-day tour of Washington DC, Boston
and Niagara Falls in the first two months. In the following, we will enjoy
two short vacations to Grand Canyon, Las Vegas and Yellowstone together.
My parents own a couple of real estate properties in the city of **, ** and
enjoy full insurance coverage and decent pension. They have a big family in
our hometown and are well respected by friends and relatives. After the trip
, they have to go back for taking care of my grandparents, since their
brothers and sisters are taking care of their old parents in turn.
Your time and consideration are deeply appreciated. I wish you a happy day!
Thank you for your time and considerations.
Sincerely yours,
** and **
再次感谢看帖和给建议的童鞋。
写得有点长，不过还在一页以内，主要突出一些强点，不知道还能不能压缩。
1）第二段我想加一句：By the way, my father studied and worked in Japan for
three years in 1980s. 感觉离题，但觉得也可以侧面证明他没有移民离开中国的倾向
，大家怎么看。
2）关于第四段，都说孩子出费用不好，那他们自己出所有的钱，这样好不好，反正确
实他们有钱。我们还要不要bank statement（要不要去银行开，还是打印）。
3）第四段写旅行计划，有没有多余。
4）第五段我抄了前人2句，但事实他们退休金只有2000多和1000多，在二线城市还可以
，不知道签证官怎么看。
5）第五段，我外公是由女儿轮休照顾，take care in turn这句话有没有意义？还是要
怎么说？
Dear Visa Officer,
My name is **, a PhD candidate at **. I am writing this letter to invite my
parents, ** and **, to visit U.S. for traveling and family reunion.
My father retired in late 2011, and my mother retired in 2001. They began
travelling around the world. They went to South Korea last year and
Australia early this year. I want to invite them to U.S. They also have
their plan to Europe in 2014.
I went back to China twice during the last three years, to stay with them
for one month each time. However, I will work on PhD thesis in the next two
years, and cannot spend a consecutive vocation with them in China. So I want
to have this opportunity for family reunion.
They will support all their expenses, such as round-trip flight, insurance
and tourism in US. They plan to go to US in April for 6 months, which is the
best season in NY. We will take them to New York City in the weekends and
let them join the tour groups such as 10-day tour of Washington DC, Boston
and Niagara Falls in the first two months. In the following, we will enjoy
two short vacations to Grand Canyon, Las Vegas and Yellowstone together.
My parents own a couple of real estate properties in the city of **, ** and
enjoy full insurance coverage and decent pension. They have a big family in
our hometown and are well respected by friends and relatives. After the trip
, they have to go back for taking care of my grandparents, since their
brothers and sisters are taking care of their old parents in turn.
Your time and consideration are deeply appreciated. I wish you a happy day!
Thank you for your time and considerations.
Sincerely yours,
** and **
再次感谢看帖和给建议的童鞋。
