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v*e
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About A Dream
It's like a dream,
When I'm stuck here, and
You are far away.
It's like a dream.
I know I'll never catch you.
The dream's never ended.
It's like a dream,
When the problems are put,
And my headache follows.
It's like a dream,
When an answer finally comes
After a whole night's strugle.
It's like a dream,
Weeks and weeks through,
Months and Months over.
It's like a dream,
The guy is singing thankfully
Of those memorable headaches.
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s*l
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胡说两句,
标题里,为什么说‘about'。
'The dream's never ended'感觉别扭,不如说
'The dream never ends'
为什么'my headache'是单数但是后来的'headaches'就是复数?

【在 v*******e 的大作中提到】
: About A Dream
: It's like a dream,
: When I'm stuck here, and
: You are far away.
: It's like a dream.
: I know I'll never catch you.
: The dream's never ended.
: It's like a dream,
: When the problems are put,
: And my headache follows.

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v*e
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啊 多谢struggle :)
这dream还没结束,it's been a dream大概感觉会不对吧?it's a dream,
全行只有一个重音,好像不行的说。。

你说少掉的pps是哪些啊?
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s*l
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'for the dream never ends'

【在 v*******e 的大作中提到】
: 啊 多谢struggle :)
: 这dream还没结束,it's been a dream大概感觉会不对吧?it's a dream,
: 全行只有一个重音,好像不行的说。。
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: 你说少掉的pps是哪些啊?

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