帮忙看看一首歌的翻译，好建议有包子奖励# Translation - 译林
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这是汪峰的一首歌，在别的论坛上看到了初版的翻译，我改动了很多，第一次尝试，大
伙见笑了，当然最后要用英语唱给自己心爱的姑娘：）请高手们指点，好的建议有包子
奖励啊。。。
我从不会轻易许下任何诺言 Never have I simply made any promises
也从不会为一个人如此心碎 Never have I broken my heart for anyone
else
而现在我可以敞开我的内心 But now I can tell you how I really feel
你是我唯一真心爱过的姑娘 You are the only girl I truly loved
可突然有一天你离开了这里 But one day you went away all of a sudden
带走了整个世界没留一片云 Took with you the whole wide world and all
its beauty
从此我就象抽麦芒的青稞 then I seem totally lost forever
在那凄风苦雨中晃曳彷徨 In the bitter wind and rain, wandering and
shaking
但是希望你明白 But hope you understand
我就在你身旁 I am always by your side
无论你在多远的地方 No matter how far you are
即使你变了模样 Even if your look has changed
即使你把我遗忘 Even if you forget me
你永远都是我心爱的姑娘 You are always the girl I truly love
愿上苍为你指引平坦的道路 May the star guides you to a smooth road
ahead
愿命运让你遇见善良的人们 May the destiny brings you to kind people
愿远方的阳光和璀璨的灯火 May the sunshine afar and bright city
lights
为你照亮每一片未来的天空 Light up every sky for you in the future
时光就象一条奔腾的河流 Time is a river, it’s rushing and
rushing
将生命中的一切悄悄带走 Taking away everything in life before we
know it
而我的心就象那翻涌的浪花 And my heart's like ocean wave, it’s
surging and surging
永远陪着你哪怕是海角天涯 Forever with you even to farthest ends of
the earth
从此希望你明白 Now hope you understand
我就在你身旁 I am always by your side
无论你在多远的地方 No matter how far you are
直到你变了模样 Till when your look has changed
直到你把我遗忘 Till when you forget me
你依然会是我心爱的姑娘 You are still the girl I truly love
真的希望你知道 Truly hope you'll come to know
我就在你身旁 I am always by your side
无论你在多远的地方 No matter how far you are
直到我去了天堂 Till when I am in Heaven
直到你把我遗忘 Till when you forget me
你依然会是我心爱的姑娘 You are still the girl I truly love
你依然会是我心爱的姑娘 You are still the girl I truly love
伙见笑了，当然最后要用英语唱给自己心爱的姑娘：）请高手们指点，好的建议有包子
奖励啊。。。
我从不会轻易许下任何诺言 Never have I simply made any promises
也从不会为一个人如此心碎 Never have I broken my heart for anyone
else
而现在我可以敞开我的内心 But now I can tell you how I really feel
你是我唯一真心爱过的姑娘 You are the only girl I truly loved
可突然有一天你离开了这里 But one day you went away all of a sudden
带走了整个世界没留一片云 Took with you the whole wide world and all
its beauty
从此我就象抽麦芒的青稞 then I seem totally lost forever
在那凄风苦雨中晃曳彷徨 In the bitter wind and rain, wandering and
shaking
但是希望你明白 But hope you understand
我就在你身旁 I am always by your side
无论你在多远的地方 No matter how far you are
即使你变了模样 Even if your look has changed
即使你把我遗忘 Even if you forget me
你永远都是我心爱的姑娘 You are always the girl I truly love
愿上苍为你指引平坦的道路 May the star guides you to a smooth road
ahead
愿命运让你遇见善良的人们 May the destiny brings you to kind people
愿远方的阳光和璀璨的灯火 May the sunshine afar and bright city
lights
为你照亮每一片未来的天空 Light up every sky for you in the future
时光就象一条奔腾的河流 Time is a river, it’s rushing and
rushing
将生命中的一切悄悄带走 Taking away everything in life before we
know it
而我的心就象那翻涌的浪花 And my heart's like ocean wave, it’s
surging and surging
永远陪着你哪怕是海角天涯 Forever with you even to farthest ends of
the earth
从此希望你明白 Now hope you understand
我就在你身旁 I am always by your side
无论你在多远的地方 No matter how far you are
直到你变了模样 Till when your look has changed
直到你把我遗忘 Till when you forget me
你依然会是我心爱的姑娘 You are still the girl I truly love
真的希望你知道 Truly hope you'll come to know
我就在你身旁 I am always by your side
无论你在多远的地方 No matter how far you are
直到我去了天堂 Till when I am in Heaven
直到你把我遗忘 Till when you forget me
你依然会是我心爱的姑娘 You are still the girl I truly love
你依然会是我心爱的姑娘 You are still the girl I truly love
