如何通过外刊学习写作（内含3小时写作课视频demo）

2023-08-28 03:08

我们的写作精品课开设已三年，今年下半年我们继续给大家带来全新主题的写作精品课，赶紧看看吧！

以下为老师们的视频demo

我们在9.6即将开课的写作课中，有一课文章将由我们写作8分以上的李老师授课，他选了DH Lawrence的一篇文章，名为Insouciance，是复旦英专大四精读的一篇散文，这篇文章还是陆谷孙《20篇：英美当代散文》之一，体会纯粹的语言之美，看看文豪如何在线怼人。除此之外，这一课选读李老师还选取了林语堂的《吾国与吾民》的一篇名为THE END OF LIFE的文章，这本书奠定了林语堂的学术地位。谈及中国人生活的方方面面，向西方展示了东方人的精神和形象。

以下为Insouciance的原文节选，篇幅有限展示部分内容。

Insouciance

by D. H. Lawrence

[1] My balcony is on the east side of the hotel, and my neighbours on the right are a Frenchman, white-haired, and his white-haired wife; my neighbours on the left are two little white-haired English ladies. And we are all mortally shy of one another.

[2] When I peep out of my room in the morning and see the matronly French lady in a purple silk wrapper, standing like the captain on the bridge surveying the morning, I pop in again before she can see me. And whenever I emerge during the day, I am aware of the two little whitehaired ladies popping back like two white rabbits, so that literally I only see the whisk of their skirt-hems.

[3] This afternoon being hot and thundery, I woke up suddenly and went out on the balcony barefoot. There I sat serenely contemplating the world, and ignoring the two bundles of feet of the two little ladies which protruded from their open doorways, upon the end of two chaises longues. A hot, still afternoon! The lake shining rather glassy away below, the mountains rather sulky, the greenness very green, all a little silent and lurid, and two mowers moving with scythes, downhill just near; slush! slush! sound the scythe-strokes.

[4] The two little ladies become aware of my presence. I become aware of a certain agitation in the two bundles of feet wrapped in two discreet steamer rugs and protruding on the end of two chaises longues from the pair of doorways upon balcony next me. One bundle of feet suddenly disappears; so does the other. Silence!

[5] Then lo! With odd sliding suddenness a little white-haired lady in grey silk, with round blue eyes, emerges and looks straight at me, and remarks that it is pleasant now. A little cooler, say I, with false amiability. She quite agrees, and we speak of the men mowing: how plainly one hears the long breaths of the scythes.

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我们的选材不仅仅限制于外刊，还取材于不同经典书目。从外刊or书中学习写作思路。

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