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New York Tales (6): The Red Paradise
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New York Tales (6): The Red Paradise

renqiulan
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There's a twilight zone in Flushing Chinatown—where I picked up the following story:

 

 

In 1968, a 19-year-old Red Guard stumbled through the dense forest, his uniform torn and mud-stained. The fervor that had driven him into these remote mountains, he hoped, could overcome fatigue and doubt. He told himself that he was lost in direction, not in purpose. His Little Red Book kept him going. There was no way he would just drop dead.

As the sun began to set, casting a golden hue over the treetops, he caught sight of something unusual. Red banners fluttered in the breeze, their bold slogans proclaiming, "Serve the People!" and "Revolution is not a Dinner Party!" His heart leapt. Could it be a hidden commune, deep in the mountains, living out the ideals of the Great Helmsman?

He pushed through the undergrowth, emerging into a vast clearing. Everything before him took his breath away. Rows of simple, yet well-kept houses stood beneath blossoming peach trees, their pink petals carpeting the ground like soft snow. Men and women in Mao suits moved about the commune with a sense of purpose, their faces serene, illuminated by an inner glow.

 

The Red Guard approached cautiously, unsure of how he would be received. To his relief, the people welcomed him with open arms, offering food, water, and a place to rest. They spoke little of the outside world, but he could feel their shared dedication to the cause. Here, in this secluded sanctuary, was the true heart of the revolution.

As night fell, the Red Guard was led to a small hut near the edge of the commune. Inside, he found a simple bed and a bookshelf filled with works of Marx, Lenin, and, of course, Chairman Mao. He felt at home, thanks to his faith in the revolution.

That night, as he drifted off to sleep, strange dreams haunted him. He saw the faces of the villagers, not as comrades, but as something else—something older, more ancient. The peach trees outside his window seemed to shimmer with an otherworldly luminescence, their petals whispering secrets in a language he could not understand.

The next morning, he awoke to a changed world. The banners and posters were gone, replaced by hand-painted scrolls of poetry and art. The villagers, too, looked different. Their Mao suits were gone, replaced by flowing robes of silk, and their expressions, once stern with revolutionary zeal, now radiated a peaceful, timeless enlightenment.

Confused, the Red Guard confronted one of the villagers. "Where are the slogans? The banners? What happened to the revolution?"

The villager smiled gently. "The revolution you speak of is but a fleeting moment in the river of time. Here, in the Peach Blossom Paradise, we follow the natural way, free from the turmoil of the outside world."

The Red Guard recoiled, his mind struggling to grasp what he was hearing. "But...the revolution is everything! How can you live without it?"

The villager's smile deepened. "Revolutions come and go, young one! But true peace is found in harmony with nature."

The Red Guard could not accept this. Now his revolutionary zeal burned brighter than ever. He resolved to "revolutionize" the paradise, to bring the villagers back to the true path. He began to organize meetings, trying to reintroduce the slogans, the struggle sessions, the fever pitch that had defined his life.

But the villagers, now unmasked, refused to follow him. They had no interest in the dogma that had consumed the outside world. The Red Guard's attempts to impose his ideology were met with gentle resistance—doors were closed to him, voices grew silent, and the peace of the paradise remained undisturbed.
 

 

Alone and aloof, the Red Guard decided to leave and find a way to bring outside forces to this place, to transform it by any means necessary. But as he reached the edge of the clearing, the path he had taken was no more. The forest seemed to close in around him. Then he simply vanished, leaving behind no trace.


Author / Illustrator: renqiulan

 

 

 

 

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暖冬cool夏
2 楼
Another version of 桃花源记!or Qiulan‘s English version:)
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暖冬cool夏
3 楼
A blend of Zen and chaos of revolution and thus a contrast
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暖冬cool夏
4 楼
Commune‘s choices vs Red Guard‘s fevor/dogma/doggednesss很有意思
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renqiulan
5 楼
Happy Friday evening! Thank you, 暖冬cool夏, for your question.
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renqiulan
6 楼
While the idea of a "Peach Blossom Paradise" during the
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renqiulan
7 楼
Cultural Revolution is intriguing, the historical realities
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renqiulan
8 楼
of the time make it highly improbable.
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renqiulan
9 楼
The "Peach Blossom Paradise" is not meant to be taken
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renqiulan
10 楼
It should be taken as a symbol of hope, resilience,
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renqiulan
11 楼
or a longing for a better world. In this sense,
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renqiulan
12 楼
it could represent the enduring spirit of
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renqiulan
13 楼
the Chinese people in the face of adversity.
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蓝灵
14 楼
So, renqiulan, you are illustrating your story. I like it.
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renqiulan
15 楼
That's wonderful to hear. Thank you for your kind words.
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蓝灵
16 楼
Are you the handsome young man in your illustration?
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renqiulan
17 楼
Truth be told,my features are not typically considered Asian
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蓝灵
18 楼
How come you have such a superb command of Chinese?
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蓝灵
19 楼
OMG! You even write classical Chinese poems.
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renqiulan
20 楼
Thank you. I've been fortunate to have a mother who is a
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renqiulan
21 楼
sinologist. She's been a wonderful teacher.
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蓝灵
22 楼
She would be my dream teacher. I envy you.
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renqiulan
23 楼
I appreciate your compliment, but remember, everyone's
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renqiulan
24 楼
journey is different.
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蓝灵
25 楼
That's true. We all have our own unique stories to tell.
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蓝灵
26 楼
What inspired you to write "The Red Paradise"?
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renqiulan
27 楼
It was the contrast between the idealism of the Cultural
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renqiulan
28 楼
Revolution and the timeless wisdom rooted in nature.
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蓝灵
29 楼
In what way the village & its inhabitants made sense to you?
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暖冬cool夏
30 楼
理解出错了。但是整个故事有点像陶渊明的《桃花源记》,不知你有没有读过?
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暖冬cool夏
31 楼
从解释看,你一定读过《桃花源记》。But even put in 文革,你的故事is still probable.
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renqiulan
32 楼
It's a return to Great Harmony in a tiny community.
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蓝灵
33 楼
What message did you hope to convey with the Red Guard's
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蓝灵
34 楼
mysterious disappearance?
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暖冬cool夏
35 楼
I see. That's how I understand 2.桃花源is also a dreamland.
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renqiulan
36 楼
读过的。在避秦的意义上,拙作与原著一致。不过,这是个文革故事,情节自然有异。想听听你的意见。
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renqiulan
37 楼
This is, after all, a tale. BTW, right off the bat, I said
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renqiulan
38 楼
I picked it up from Flushing Chinatown's twilight zone.
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renqiulan
39 楼
It spoke to the futility of imposing transient ideologies on
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renqiulan
40 楼
enduring natural truths.
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蓝灵
41 楼
Is "The Red Paradise" a critique of the Cultural Revolution
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蓝灵
42 楼
or does it explore universal themes?
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renqiulan
43 楼
Both.
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蓝灵
44 楼
Why did you choose the Cultural Revolution as the backdrop
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蓝灵
45 楼
for this story?
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renqiulan
46 楼
The Cultural Revolution's clash with "the better angels of
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renqiulan
47 楼
our nature" provided a rich setting for seeking freedom.
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蓝灵
48 楼
What significance do the peach trees and the blooming
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蓝灵
49 楼
flowers hold in the story?
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renqiulan
50 楼
They symbolize the natural, enduring beauty and wisdom
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renqiulan
51 楼
incomprehensible to ideologues and their meek followers.
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蓝灵
52 楼
How does the Little Red Book function as a symbol here?
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renqiulan
53 楼
It represents a guiding force of misguided masses.
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蓝灵
54 楼
How about the Red Guard’s struggle to revolutionize
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蓝灵
55 楼
the paradise?
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暖冬cool夏
56 楼
可能是因为我对《桃花源记》印象太深,又对纽约twilight zone不熟悉的原因,一下子就自己先把故事对号入座.

No offend.

Qiulan, seriously,你的中英文都这么好,其实可以考虑写一些中国优秀的故事,中国的四大名著等等。最近的Black Mystery就是一个例子,听说是《西游记》的翻版(我没有看过)。据说国内的仙侠剧也很popular, 你完全可以利用你中英文的长处,把这些故事写成英文,像Black Mystery一样,成为家喻户晓的author/writer.

Just my 2 cents. You definitely could turn your language talents into profits:)) 不好意思,我钻钱眼里了:)

非常喜欢你的英文和中文诗词!谢谢分享!

Good night,Qiulan!

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renqiulan
57 楼
He was trying in vain to "cancel" true peace in harmony.
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蓝灵
58 楼
What role does the concept of time play in The Red Paradise?
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renqiulan
59 楼
太感谢了,拙文不足道,故事大半是子乌虚有的胡诌。但如洲明所言:“常著文章自娱,颇示己志。”
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renqiulan
60 楼
Time conceptualizes the enduring cycles of nature, which the
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renqiulan
61 楼
villagers embrace.
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renqiulan
62 楼
We had a great conversation. Talk to you soon.
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蓝灵
63 楼
You have a nice weekend.
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renqiulan
64 楼
You too!
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暖冬cool夏
65 楼
Wow, I didn't even read五柳先生传。让我再次敬仰一下!赞你的淡泊!
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天边一片白云
66 楼
is there a twilight zone in Flushing Chinatown?
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天边一片白云
67 楼
I couldn't find it in the internet?
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天边一片白云
68 楼
I am surprised you know culture revolution so well.
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天边一片白云
69 楼
a big contract between Red Paradise and Peach flower garden
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天边一片白云
70 楼
agree. true peace is found in harmony with nature
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天边一片白云
71 楼
I took this picture in Folks , Olympic national park.

this is the twilight zone

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瓷善家
72 楼
Good story and nice writing !Very impressive !
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renqiulan
73 楼
In a nutshell, my theme is to live free from tyranny.
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renqiulan
74 楼
Happy Saturday to you, 白云! I made "the twilight zone" up.
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renqiulan
75 楼
I enjoyed such prerogative as a creative writer, didn't I?
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renqiulan
76 楼
Speaking of Olympic National Park, I'm tempted to quote
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renqiulan
77 楼
John Muir: "The clearest way into the Universe is through a
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renqiulan
78 楼
a forest wilderness."
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renqiulan
79 楼
I believe that peace is found in nature's embrace.
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renqiulan
80 楼
I'm no expert on the Cultural Revolution.
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renqiulan
81 楼
Thank you so much for your kind words!
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天边一片白云
82 楼
haha. I thought only the story is what you make up.
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天边一片白云
83 楼
you are very creative and full of imagination.
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