m*n
2 楼
l*r
3 楼
Starving and exhausted, Ray wrapped up his laptop and dragged himself out of
the company building. It’s already dark outside and his car is the only
one in the lot, all alone and helpless. It was just another dreadful long
day. Everything at work started to crack about six months ago, and has slid
into an endless downward spiral since then.
“Fantastic, just worse and worse.”, Ray mumbled to himself, still thinking
of the rumor of another round of layoff at work, as he drove the car off
Main Stre
the company building. It’s already dark outside and his car is the only
one in the lot, all alone and helpless. It was just another dreadful long
day. Everything at work started to crack about six months ago, and has slid
into an endless downward spiral since then.
“Fantastic, just worse and worse.”, Ray mumbled to himself, still thinking
of the rumor of another round of layoff at work, as he drove the car off
Main Stre
A*t
4 楼
是系统有延时。。等等就好。。呵呵
l*r
5 楼
响应号召，第一次尝试用英文写，请轻拍。
写了一节才发现，英文好占字数，已经快400多字了？！按俺的初步构思，只好偷偷改作中篇了，什么时候能写完，就无法保证了：（
写了一节才发现，英文好占字数，已经快400多字了？！按俺的初步构思，只好偷偷改作中篇了，什么时候能写完，就无法保证了：（
c*y
6 楼
1、首先确认，已经 购买成功
2、配置成功后，选择“保存”，然后“[设为当前]”
3、到“家页”看头像是否已经更新。
如果有更新，那么发表文章后，隔一会儿形象就会更新过来。
【在 f*******8 的大作中提到】
: 已经装备上了啊？我的物品里也都显示“已穿上”
2、配置成功后，选择“保存”，然后“[设为当前]”
3、到“家页”看头像是否已经更新。
如果有更新，那么发表文章后，隔一会儿形象就会更新过来。
【在 f*******8 的大作中提到】
: 已经装备上了啊？我的物品里也都显示“已穿上”
a*d
7 楼
kick! 400 words is still far away from 6000. Don't make the OX tail rotted !
改作中篇了，什么时候能写完，就无法保证了：（
【在 l*r 的大作中提到】
: 响应号召，第一次尝试用英文写，请轻拍。
: 写了一节才发现，英文好占字数，已经快400多字了？！按俺的初步构思，只好偷偷改作中篇了，什么时候能写完，就无法保证了：（
改作中篇了，什么时候能写完，就无法保证了：（
【在 l*r 的大作中提到】
: 响应号召，第一次尝试用英文写，请轻拍。
: 写了一节才发现，英文好占字数，已经快400多字了？！按俺的初步构思，只好偷偷改作中篇了，什么时候能写完，就无法保证了：（
l*r
8 楼
得再多读几篇英文小说，找找语感。。。
好多词都不会说，只好瞎编了，
对俺真是太难了，硬着头皮上的啊
!
【在 a***d 的大作中提到】
: kick! 400 words is still far away from 6000. Don't make the OX tail rotted !
:
: 改作中篇了，什么时候能写完，就无法保证了：（
好多词都不会说，只好瞎编了，
对俺真是太难了，硬着头皮上的啊
!
【在 a***d 的大作中提到】
: kick! 400 words is still far away from 6000. Don't make the OX tail rotted !
:
: 改作中篇了，什么时候能写完，就无法保证了：（
D*6
9 楼
大家都忒厉害了。。。
英文是费纸，以前翻译书的时候，一页英文等于半页中文。
of
slid
thinking
【在 l*r 的大作中提到】
: Starving and exhausted, Ray wrapped up his laptop and dragged himself out of
: the company building. It’s already dark outside and his car is the only
: one in the lot, all alone and helpless. It was just another dreadful long
: day. Everything at work started to crack about six months ago, and has slid
: into an endless downward spiral since then.
: “Fantastic, just worse and worse.”, Ray mumbled to himself, still thinking
: of the rumor of another round of layoff at work, as he drove the car off
: Main Stre
英文是费纸，以前翻译书的时候，一页英文等于半页中文。
of
slid
thinking
【在 l*r 的大作中提到】
: Starving and exhausted, Ray wrapped up his laptop and dragged himself out of
: the company building. It’s already dark outside and his car is the only
: one in the lot, all alone and helpless. It was just another dreadful long
: day. Everything at work started to crack about six months ago, and has slid
: into an endless downward spiral since then.
: “Fantastic, just worse and worse.”, Ray mumbled to himself, still thinking
: of the rumor of another round of layoff at work, as he drove the car off
: Main Stre
l*r
10 楼
哈哈，俺争取写短点，环保一些：）
中文两个词说完了，用英文到我这儿好几句都拎不清，比我想象的还难，真是费劲啊！
【在 D******6 的大作中提到】
: 大家都忒厉害了。。。
: 英文是费纸，以前翻译书的时候，一页英文等于半页中文。
:
: of
: slid
: thinking
中文两个词说完了，用英文到我这儿好几句都拎不清，比我想象的还难，真是费劲啊！
【在 D******6 的大作中提到】
: 大家都忒厉害了。。。
: 英文是费纸，以前翻译书的时候，一页英文等于半页中文。
:
: of
: slid
: thinking
a*e
11 楼
牛筋写得很好啊，语感十分对头。
l*r
12 楼
谢谢鼓励
【在 a******e 的大作中提到】
: 牛筋写得很好啊，语感十分对头。
【在 a******e 的大作中提到】
: 牛筋写得很好啊，语感十分对头。
i*s
13 楼
And there Ray saw it, in her pink sweaty palm, a tiny little shiny, tooth.
Impressing image~
But why F-word? Why not straight it out? We are all 18+, so do your Ray. At the mid-age, he must say those words alot.It makes story more vivid, just my two cents~
Impressing image~
But why F-word? Why not straight it out? We are all 18+, so do your Ray. At the mid-age, he must say those words alot.It makes story more vivid, just my two cents~
e*d
14 楼
ha..ha..it was cool. When I lost my first tooth, I cried my eye out and
thought that it would never
grow back.
of
slid
thinking
【在 l*r 的大作中提到】
: Starving and exhausted, Ray wrapped up his laptop and dragged himself out of
: the company building. It’s already dark outside and his car is the only
: one in the lot, all alone and helpless. It was just another dreadful long
: day. Everything at work started to crack about six months ago, and has slid
: into an endless downward spiral since then.
: “Fantastic, just worse and worse.”, Ray mumbled to himself, still thinking
: of the rumor of another round of layoff at work, as he drove the car off
: Main Stre
thought that it would never
grow back.
of
slid
thinking
【在 l*r 的大作中提到】
: Starving and exhausted, Ray wrapped up his laptop and dragged himself out of
: the company building. It’s already dark outside and his car is the only
: one in the lot, all alone and helpless. It was just another dreadful long
: day. Everything at work started to crack about six months ago, and has slid
: into an endless downward spiral since then.
: “Fantastic, just worse and worse.”, Ray mumbled to himself, still thinking
: of the rumor of another round of layoff at work, as he drove the car off
: Main Stre
l*r
15 楼
恩，有道理
还有一点点原因是后面还没想好，有可能是可以给小朋友看的哦
tooth.
At the mid-age, he must say those words alot.It makes story more vivid,
just my two cents~
【在 i*********s 的大作中提到】
: And there Ray saw it, in her pink sweaty palm, a tiny little shiny, tooth.
: Impressing image~
: But why F-word? Why not straight it out? We are all 18+, so do your Ray. At the mid-age, he must say those words alot.It makes story more vivid, just my two cents~
还有一点点原因是后面还没想好，有可能是可以给小朋友看的哦
tooth.
At the mid-age, he must say those words alot.It makes story more vivid,
just my two cents~
【在 i*********s 的大作中提到】
: And there Ray saw it, in her pink sweaty palm, a tiny little shiny, tooth.
: Impressing image~
: But why F-word? Why not straight it out? We are all 18+, so do your Ray. At the mid-age, he must say those words alot.It makes story more vivid, just my two cents~
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