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Rhyming game. :D

Rhyming game. :D# Translation - 译林

M*m2007-05-22 07:05

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Love's labour's lost
Your smile is a ray of penetrating light
Like a breeze in the hot summer's night
I don't know if it is wrong or right
Fall in love with you at the first sight
Hope flies away like a threadless kite
Love grows till it starts to bite
Never expect that we could ever fight
Your heart like a clam becomes airtight
I'll conquer all the mountains' height
To chase your sweet Angel's flight
Till I exhaust all my hopeless might
To end this dream and endless plight

v*a2007-05-22 07:05

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love's labour's lost, 是不是莎士比亚有这么首14行诗?

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: Love's labour's lost
: Your smile is a ray of penetrating light
: Like a breeze in the hot summer's night
: I don't know if it is wrong or right
: Fall in love with you at the first sight
: Hope flies away like a threadless kite
: Love grows till it starts to bite
: Never expect that we could ever fight
: Your heart like a clam becomes airtight
: I'll conquer all the mountains' height

M*m2007-05-22 07:05

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Not his sonnet, but his drama. He made use of the "'s", so there were two
meanings of the title. "Love is labour and is lost." or "Love's labour is
lost."
Chinese translation of that drama used the second meaning. :D

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: love's labour's lost, 是不是莎士比亚有这么首14行诗?

b*e2007-05-22 07:05

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mm创作的？不错啊

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M*m2007-05-22 07:05

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GG!

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: mm创作的？不错啊

v*a2007-05-22 07:05

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狗狗？我要养只大狗狗

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: GG!

b*e2007-05-22 07:05

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小狗狗你给介绍下背景再翻译下

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: GG!

M*m2007-05-22 07:05

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I had a crush with an American girl and we played this rhyming game.
We started alternatively
Walking along the street (f)
A shadow chases your feet (m)
I am glad that we could meet
And I will give you a costly treat
I like everything except meat
But they never offer us a good seat
.....
And the last one is
Everything happens in such a blip
Just like 1960's movie clip
We had so much fun rhyming a story together and I told her I could write
her a poetry like the rhyming. The above is what I did.

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: 小狗狗你给介绍下背景再翻译下

v*a2007-05-22 07:05

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你太油彩了

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: I had a crush with an American girl and we played this rhyming game.
: We started alternatively
: Walking along the street (f)
: A shadow chases your feet (m)
: I am glad that we could meet
: And I will give you a costly treat
: I like everything except meat
: But they never offer us a good seat
: .....
: And the last one is

b*e2007-05-22 07:05

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才情，先有情才有才

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: 你太油彩了

v*a2007-05-22 07:05

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太JP了

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: 才情，先有情才有才