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小孩今年三年级。今天把在学校的作文拿回家,给我吃惊了一下。。。还以为学校什么
都不教呢。其实他们不知不觉,学了不少。。。
What should i wish for?
As all became silent and only six candles a flame fought away the darkness.
As cold air rode up my nose and mouth and out again. A strange tingle lurked
in my stomach. I begin to thin " what should i wish for ? My mom wispers to
me but i didnot make out what she is saying. " the day i become six, a
joyful day indeed but every time i begin to wish my mind goes blank. "come
on, wish" Said S and D. But it to was blinked out by the darkness, the
silents and cold air from the night. Then suddenly a burst of voices filled
the room. As my eyes opened i said" well. thank you all i almost forgot we
didnot sing yet." then my mind has set to work i knew what to wish for !!
After the song i closed my eyes and blew with my warm baby bear air. The
silents was over the house filled with sounds again! People shouted. "Yeah,
its cake time. Time to eat!" But if you want to know the wish, i cant tell
you that!!!
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d*g
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你们有特别推过写作吗?
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u*a
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还是有许多语法错误。
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s*7
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这是课堂的写作练习吗?老师是否指导?一些细节描写不错,不知道三年级
是不是还不教语法,只注重描写和词汇锻炼?
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c*3
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这是他们的课堂练习。老师给一个纲要,说要练习写一个情景什么的。然后是列几点要
求,强调要detail.
小孩只喜欢恐龙,captain underpant之类的书。我正犯愁要准备推语文,可是不知怎
么开始。

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【在 c*********3 的大作中提到】
: 小孩今年三年级。今天把在学校的作文拿回家,给我吃惊了一下。。。还以为学校什么
: 都不教呢。其实他们不知不觉,学了不少。。。
: What should i wish for?
: As all became silent and only six candles a flame fought away the darkness.
: As cold air rode up my nose and mouth and out again. A strange tingle lurked
: in my stomach. I begin to thin " what should i wish for ? My mom wispers to
: me but i didnot make out what she is saying. " the day i become six, a
: joyful day indeed but every time i begin to wish my mind goes blank. "come
: on, wish" Said S and D. But it to was blinked out by the darkness, the
: silents and cold air from the night. Then suddenly a burst of voices filled

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R*i
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细节写的真好!6岁就上三年级啦?这得跳过几次啊?
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c*3
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没有没有。要是这么天才,我都要笑死了。我想小孩是写回忆.
现在只是小推了数学。amazon 的tenmakers,免费的。很好。www.tenmarks.com/login
可是英语就不知要怎么做。。:(

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【在 c*********3 的大作中提到】
: 小孩今年三年级。今天把在学校的作文拿回家,给我吃惊了一下。。。还以为学校什么
: 都不教呢。其实他们不知不觉,学了不少。。。
: What should i wish for?
: As all became silent and only six candles a flame fought away the darkness.
: As cold air rode up my nose and mouth and out again. A strange tingle lurked
: in my stomach. I begin to thin " what should i wish for ? My mom wispers to
: me but i didnot make out what she is saying. " the day i become six, a
: joyful day indeed but every time i begin to wish my mind goes blank. "come
: on, wish" Said S and D. But it to was blinked out by the darkness, the
: silents and cold air from the night. Then suddenly a burst of voices filled

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n*2
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赞!
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n*2
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谢谢推荐,这个必须有老师提供的parent code才能注册是吗

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【在 c*********3 的大作中提到】
: 没有没有。要是这么天才,我都要笑死了。我想小孩是写回忆.
: 现在只是小推了数学。amazon 的tenmakers,免费的。很好。www.tenmarks.com/login
: 可是英语就不知要怎么做。。:(
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c*3
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不用的。自己注册就好。这个很好,孩子很喜欢。也有video teaching, jam 和reward
section.都是common core的应用题。

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【在 c*********3 的大作中提到】
: 小孩今年三年级。今天把在学校的作文拿回家,给我吃惊了一下。。。还以为学校什么
: 都不教呢。其实他们不知不觉,学了不少。。。
: What should i wish for?
: As all became silent and only six candles a flame fought away the darkness.
: As cold air rode up my nose and mouth and out again. A strange tingle lurked
: in my stomach. I begin to thin " what should i wish for ? My mom wispers to
: me but i didnot make out what she is saying. " the day i become six, a
: joyful day indeed but every time i begin to wish my mind goes blank. "come
: on, wish" Said S and D. But it to was blinked out by the darkness, the
: silents and cold air from the night. Then suddenly a burst of voices filled

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n*2
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可能现在变了,必须有parent code才可以注册。我刚给老师发了邮件,希望她可以注
册然后发一个parent code给我

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: 不用的。自己注册就好。这个很好,孩子很喜欢。也有video teaching, jam 和reward
: section.都是common core的应用题。
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