PTE大作文本周高频范文【气候变化】 + 改革后备考方法
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各位学霸们好,今天黄老师来跟大家分享一下PTE写作ESSAY一道很难的高频题解析 - 气候变化的责任。
完整题目如下:
Who do you think should be responsible for climate change : Government, major companies, or individuals?
在我们看范文之前,黄老师想说一下PTE大作文常见误区:
1.PTE大作文需要高分词汇,而且不是万能词汇如(imperative之类的),而是话题对应词汇(如climate deterioration等)。
2. 所以模板中的万能好词其实不能给词汇加太多的分数,我们还需要在机经中背诵话题词汇。
3. 高分词组搭配比单个词汇得分高,而且要高很多。
4. 每篇文章高分词组搭配不需要多,3-5个即可,同学们可以在机经答案中背诵,但是一定要确保质量过关。
5. 范文不需要背诵句子,记忆思路 + 3-5组高分搭配即可,然后套入模板中就是一篇8分作文啦
该话题的高分词组搭配为:
climate deterioration n. 环境恶化
high-emission diesel generator n. 高污柴油生产器
major energy producer n. 主要能源生产商
ongoing extraction of fossil fuel n. 对化石燃料的持续勘采
那么,接下来我们来看范文吧: (开头结尾段较为固定,故只列出中间段)
*范文收录于《雅培英语PTE满分答案 - 8月高频版》
大作文模板需要涵盖8大高分语法结构,而不是同一结构反复出现
Who do you think should be responsible for climate change : Government, major companies, or individuals?
个人段:
We can look at where climate deterioration is originated from – the people who consume the final products from fossil fuels, and, more specifically, those who consume a fair bit more than the rest. Many people across the world lack access to a steady, clean electricity supply and instead use high-emission diesel generators to generate electricity.
公司+政府段:
Fossil fuel firms clearly play a major role in the climate problem. A huge part of the world’s greenhouse gas emissions over the previous decades can be attributed to a series of major energy producers and their ongoing extraction of fossil fuels. Widening out the frame from individual consumption, another way climate blame is often apportioned is by looking at which countries emit the most, and thereby their governments.
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