2022年8月27日本周雅思写作真题【极限运动】范文-超高频重现

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2022-08-28 21:08

雅培英语—墨尔本专业雅思/PTE培训机构，教务微信ipenglishmel

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师跟大家来分享一个周六（2022.8.27）雅思大作文真题范文，本周考题如下：

2022.8.27真题

Extreme sports are dangerous and government should ban all forms of extreme sports. Do you agree or disagree?

该题为标准的老题重现，在2022年11月28日考过，当时黄老师已经写过范文，所以这次黄老师就从上次的范文中挑出一些8分句来分享。

题目分析

在我们看范文之前，黄老师想对于雅思大作文的词汇说几点：

雅思大作文的用词分为几个档次：

1.用词错误：e.g. extreme sports are ❎ threatening. (威胁的)

2.用词正确：e.g. … are ✅ dangerous. (有危险的)

3. 用词书面：e.g. … are ✅ extremely risky. (极度风险)

4. 用词精确：e.g. …. are 💯lethal. (致命危险)

对于不同分数段的学生来说，用词的目标也不同：

6分：确保正确，尽量书面（词汇纠错为主）

7分：确保书面，尽量精确（系统学习书面词汇）

8分：确保精确，尽量地道（积累母语新闻期刊词汇）

但是，这并不意味着如果你要考6分，就不需要准备精确地道词了。因为这些词无论是在多少分数段中，只要正确出现，就能够让考官眼前一亮，有可能给文章加分的。

同时，黄老师范文段落中的词汇，均为在英文新闻期刊中积累的地道母语者词汇（8分词汇），由黄老师根据雅思考题一个个查资料辛苦写积累。这样就省去了同学们大量的查阅资料时间。大家请一定要仔细学习积累哦！

那么，让我们来看范文吧：

满分词汇&高分段落

2022.8.27真题

Extreme sports are dangerous and government should ban all forms of extreme sports. Do you agree or disagree?

满分词汇：

lethal adj. 致命的

casualty reports n. 伤亡报道

risk-free environment n. 无风险环境

catastrophic adj. 毁灭性的

impose v. 施加

counterproductive adj. 有反效果的

fanatic n. 狂热份子

论点1：

Extreme sports are extremely lethal and lead to numerous casualty reports in the globe each year, which should be of concern to government.

展开1：

Unlike other forms of sports, which are mostly participated in a risk-free environment, even the smallest mistakes in extreme sports can have catastrophic — even lethal — effects, which leads critics believe government should step in and impose restrictions on such sports.

论点2：

Banning all forms of extreme sports can be counterproductive in various circumstances, leading these already dangerous activities to go underground and become even more risky.

展开2：

It is unquestionable that extreme sports fanatic will continue seeking every possibility of participating such activities without any proper training facilities and safety gears, which are also banned by law.