【雅思写作】题目有best必定5.5？一定是这里出了问题

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2022-05-05 23:05

雅培英语—墨尔本专业雅思/PTE培训机构，教务微信ipenglishmel

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师跟大家来聊聊雅思大作文中最难题型 - best题目 - 的写法。

不少同学跟黄老师说过：只要题目带best，出来必定是5.5分。这其实不一定是因为大家的词汇语法出了问题，而更多的是这类题的解题思路（评分标准中的task response）出问题了。今天，黄老师就给大家带来一个考官使用过的解题方法。

举例分析

比如，我们来看这道题（简化版）：

Some people think the best way to resolve traffic problem is to build more roads. Do you agree or disagree?

如果大家想到的观点是这样的话：

❎ 修更多的路可以增加高峰期车的流量，从而减缓堵塞。

❎ 修更多的路开车的人也会增加，从而不能减缓堵塞。

就是典型的雅思写作5.5分论点了。因为同学们并未点到题目中最核心的词：the best。大家可以仔细想想：

✅ 这道题是让大家证明：修路是不是最好的解决交通堵塞的方法。

❎ 而不是：修路能不能解决交通堵塞。

而对于是不是最好的来进行论证，我们可以证明：

1.它是最好的：它比其他所有都要更好

2.它不是最好的：有1-2个反例比它更好。

同学们可以发现，方法2明显比方法1要容易，因为只需要举1-2个反例即可，而这恰恰是考官大量采用的方法，所以对于best类题目的文章结构应为：

（请仔细记住下列结构！！！）

中间段1 - 为什么题目方法有用（一定要写让步段，不能直接写其他方法更好）

中间段2 - 为什么方法1更好（需要自己构思，而且需要和题干方法比较）

中间段3 - 为什么方法2更好（需要自己构思，而且需要和题干方法比较）

结论 - 题目方法好，但是不是最好的

而该结构就是雅思考官在写best类题型是会大量采取的结构了，同学们请一定优先以考官使用的结构为主，而不要盲目的相信其他的未经证实结构。

在最后，黄老师附上去年的一道雅思大作文真题，同学们可以仔细分析黄老师范文内的词句，是如何体现出best论证的。

满分词汇与高分段落

2021.11.20真题

The best way to deal with the problem related to the traffic and transportation is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

满分词汇：

major cities n. 大城市

comprehensive adj. 完善的

walkability n. 走路方便程度

severity n. 严重度

urban dwellers n. 城市居留者

ditch v. 抛弃

walking distance n. 走路就能到的距离

alleviate v. 缓解

work in concert v. 携手运作

obstruct traffic flow 阻碍交通

circuity n. (路很)绕

让步段：

It is possible to live without a car in most major cities due to their comprehensive transportation systems and high walkability to a variety of facilitates, which reduces the severity of traffic congestion raised from commuting to and from cities. Promoting city living can allow a huge number of urban dwellers to ditch cars as they have their work places, supermarkets, and various entertainment facilities within easy access via public transportation or even walking distance, and hence can alleviate traffic problem centered around city to some extent

反驳段1：

However, traffic congestion is an extremely sophisticated conundrum, and no single measure can deliver a best and complete solution. In fact, several other measures can work in concert with reallocating residences to urban areas to retain to problem to an acceptable level. The first is to enforce existing road traffic laws to deal with illegal parking, waiting, loading, which all obstruct traffic flow, reduce capacity at junctions, hold up buses, and increase danger to those walking or cycling. Also, raising gasoline taxes would notably slow the rate of increase of all automotive travel other than peak-hour commuting.

反驳段2：

Furthermore, often traffic problem is not width of the road, but where it goes. A new road that goes directly to the right place can replace a longer route that does not. Therefore, reducing the circuity of the network through selected connections can reduce congestion and total traffic by taking traffic off of longer routes.