《Sunday, Monday, and the Other Days》《周日、周一及其他日子》

《Sunday, Monday, and the Other Days》

Sunday is short
Monday is long

are the other days in between
yes but no

having friends makes
every day the same
short but longing

《周日、周一及其他日子》

周日短暂
周一漫长

其他日子介于之间吗
是，却不是

拥有朋友让
每天都一样
短暂却渴望

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周一漫长，太对了！尤其是周一上午，除非开会，否则状态完全不在线。小西的诗来得太应景啦。LOL

having friends makes every day the same short but longing

起承转合，此处转得漂亮。既呼应了前面的long 和short, 又升华了全诗的意境～～

献上 the theme song of Happy Days

 

 

What a beautiful poem for Monday morning!

盈盈平时上班，周末还要在美坛值班，盈盈辛苦了，问好！

You got it! Thank you for your nice comment.

This happy days song matches my poem perfectly! 谢谢水鸟分享。

A great poem! good to read~!

Thank you for your encouragement! Happy Monday!

茜西好，thank you for reading and commenting!

谢谢小西。前几周比较忙，最近好一些了。谢谢你的佳作。悦读欣赏～～

My poem was inspired by a comment renqiulan left here. 谢谢秋兰！

秋兰10月15日（周日晚上）在盈盈发表的一个帖子下方的留言：

"Sunday nights are notoriously short. Goodnight, everyone!"

详见里面的链接：

 

"Under the light, yet under" By Emily Dickinson - 盈盈一笑间发表于 美语世界 - 论坛 | 文学城 (wenxuecity.com)

秋兰在上面帖子里的留言："Sunday nights are notoriously short. Goodnight, everyone!"

 

盈盈过奖了，谢谢鼓励。

再读再赞小西短小哲理的好诗！七仙女写的真好！

谢谢茜茜公主的美言和鼓励。

How the two meanings are connected: long(长）vs longing(渴望）？

One explanation: they come from different sources

LONG1 (adj): Old English lang

LONG2 (v): Old English langian from Germanic langōn

Interesting, thanks!

再写一首，腊月，正月其他月子，如何？

Yes, they're from different origins.

哈哈哈，好主意，移月接日，这应该是移哥的拿手好戏吧，期待 ：）