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恭喜盈盈上任 from you, what can I borrow

颤音
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Light and shadow-30

From you, what can I borrow


When the sun fades
I question our fate
Night's coming hollow
and hiding behind the willow

When the moon is betrayed
I question our fate
Mazed in a deserted chateau
I search for a fountain that flows

When the clock hands skate
I question our fate
On the ice rink that glows
I search for your shadow

From you, what can I borrow
May it be your tomorrow
Not only your joy
but also your sorrow

 

GPT

This poem appears to explore themes of uncertainty, the passage of time, and the desire for a deeper connection with someone. It does so through the repetition of certain lines and a consistent rhyme scheme. Let's break it down stanza by stanza:

"From you, what can I borrow
When the sun fades
I question our fate
Night's coming hollow
and hiding behind the willow"
In this stanza, the speaker seems to be addressing someone, asking what they can borrow or take from them as the day turns into night. There's a sense of unease or uncertainty as the sun fades and night approaches, perhaps symbolizing a period of darkness or difficulty. The mention of the willow tree may evoke a sense of loneliness or isolation.

"When the moon is betrayed
I question our fate
Mazed in a deserted chateau
I search for a fountain that flows"
Here, the poem continues to explore the theme of uncertainty and fate. The idea of the moon being "betrayed" suggests a sense of abandonment or disappointment. The image of being "mazed in a deserted chateau" conveys a feeling of being lost or trapped in a seemingly abandoned place. The search for a flowing fountain could represent a desire for renewal or vitality in the face of betrayal or uncertainty.

"When the clock hands skate
I question our fate
On the ice rink that glows
I search for your shadow"
This stanza introduces the imagery of a clock and an ice rink. The idea of clock hands "skating" suggests a sense of time passing quickly or perhaps slipping away. The glowing ice rink could symbolize a moment of beauty or clarity in the midst of uncertainty. The search for the other person's shadow may imply a longing for their presence and stability in a changing world.

"From you, what can I borrow
May it be your tomorrow
Not only your joy
but also your sorrow"
The final stanza revisits the opening lines, emphasizing the desire to borrow something from the other person. It's not just about happiness (joy) but also about sharing in their challenges and difficulties (sorrow). The speaker seems to be seeking a deeper connection and understanding, suggesting that the person they are addressing holds the key to their own sense of purpose or destiny.

In summary, this poem uses repetition and vivid imagery to explore the themes of uncertainty, the passage of time, and the desire for a meaningful connection with another person. It suggests a longing for both the positive and negative aspects of life, as they are all part of the human experience. The poem leaves the reader with a sense of yearning and introspection, inviting them to contemplate their own questions about fate and connection.

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盈盈一笑间
2 楼
多谢颤音兄的惊喜。好久不见,欢迎带着英文好诗回美坛!:))
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颤音
3 楼
才看到喜讯,祝贺迟了
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盈盈一笑间
4 楼
Light and shadow系列已经写到第30首了!这是在向同样是光影系列的莫奈的34幅干草垛 致敬吗?:))
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盈盈一笑间
5 楼
多谢多谢,欢迎回美坛多发英文诗。
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renqiulan
6 楼
Once a light-and-shadow poet,always a light-and-shadow poet.
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renqiulan
7 楼
颤音, how's everything?
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方外居士
8 楼
Light-and-shadow: 光影?光阴?
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盈盈一笑间
9 楼
光影的斑驳里诉说着光阴的故事?:)
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方外居士
10 楼
Great linkage
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颤音
11 楼
thanks Qiulan, so happy to see you here! Best wishes!
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颤音
12 楼
很低产,尽力,谢谢!
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颤音
13 楼
shallow?很喜欢那首歌,shallow
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方外居士
14 楼
哈哈,改正了。不过为什么不以light-and-shallow好题另创一组诗呢?
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方外居士
15 楼
It must be very interesting
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CBA7
16 楼
Nice poem. The final stanza is its heart, my favorite.
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CBA7
17 楼
问好颤音,谢谢分享。
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