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【Poem Reading Tuesday】Assonance and HW:【Friend】
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【Poem Reading Tuesday】Assonance and HW:【Friend】

妖妖灵
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Assonance is the repetition of the vowel sound across words within the lines of the poem creating internal rhymes. Examples of assonance across words include: crying time; hop-scotch; great flakes; between trees; and, the kind knight rides by.

Very skilled poets use assonance in poetry to change the mood of the poem. Long vowel sounds will decrease the energy at that point in the poem and make the mood more serious. Higher vowel sounds will increase the energy and lighten the mood.

 

Example:

Bells by Edgar Allan Poe

......

Hear the mellow wedding bells,
Golden bells!
What a world of happiness their harmony foretells
......

 

Homework

1. Write Lyrics named 【Friend】with alternate rhyme

ABAB CDCD EFEF

(Alternate rhyme:https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/311858.html )


2. May consider using alliteration,assonance,hyperbole,personification,etc

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妖妖灵
2 楼
这次等着童鞋们开启第一句哈~
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移花接木
3 楼
foretell rhym 在第二个e
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妖妖灵
4 楼
观察力好细!:)
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妖妖灵
5 楼
那我先来第一句:The sky is not lonely with clouds‘ company
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最西边的岛上
6 楼
cirrus,cumulus,stratus, nimbus
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最西边的岛上
7 楼
是云彩的四种分类,瞎放的,不一定合适,随灵美眉任意取舍改
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妖妖灵
8 楼
非常棒!我下面的第4句和你这句押韵接好啦:)
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暖冬cool夏
9 楼
The sun,the moon and stars alternate on the canopy
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妖妖灵
10 楼
Pisces, Aries, Gemini,Taurus,Sagittarius
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妖妖灵
11 楼
暖冬mm接得好漂亮!你介意说出你的星座吗?我可以加在上面这句歌词里:)哇哈哈!歌词接龙太好玩啦!!!
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妖妖灵
12 楼
简直不能想象,一起玩歌词接龙居然这么好玩!其实写歌词最重要一环就是brainstorm,大家一起写轻易就完成这个环节!
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暖冬cool夏
13 楼
Sagittarius 射手座,刚刚查了:)谢谢妖mm!
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妖妖灵
14 楼
哈哈,完美的押韵!:)这次我们最终争取把这首歌唱出来或者Rap出来:)
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暖冬cool夏
15 楼
Friends are the sun in the rainy day
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暖冬cool夏
16 楼
Like the moon illuminating the dark night
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暖冬cool夏
17 楼
今天超额完成:)凑合着写,妖mm可以根据需要随意修改集成。
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移花接木
18 楼
My brain is stormed
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妖妖灵
19 楼
太棒啦!等着更多童鞋们参与!:)
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妖妖灵
20 楼
哈哈,perfect time for a brainstorm!:)
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妖妖灵
21 楼
Friends are the beacon when we go astray
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妖妖灵
22 楼
把题目改成Friends更好些:)
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甜虫虫
23 楼
The glue holding us together during a plight
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妖妖灵
24 楼
哈哈,接龙光速!虫虫你看完知了回来了?嘿嘿,看见你的星座了吗?:)
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妖妖灵
25 楼
谁愿意用这次的歌词玩AI?有自愿报名的吗?:)
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甜虫虫
26 楼
Yes, I saw Aries:)you’re so sweet!

We came home last weekend. I've been busy with catching up on the work last 3 days. 
I was browsing the forum while cooking dinner, and saw your verse, then the right side of my brain kicks in. :)
 

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妖妖灵
27 楼
Perfect! :)
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甜虫虫
28 楼
Friends are books opening doors to new worlds
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妖妖灵
29 楼
西岛美眉接着去接哈!:)
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妖妖灵
30 楼
童鞋们接着接哈!歌的结构:主歌(verse)1,副歌(chorus)1,主歌2,副歌2,还可有bridge,最后副歌3。
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最西边的岛上
31 楼
sorry, but my brain is storned 2. ;-)
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