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请教一首诗的翻译，谢谢！

请教一首诗的翻译，谢谢！# Translation - 译林

g*e2008-05-28 07:05

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各位能帮忙看一下这个翻译吗？多谢了！
原文：
如果有来生，要做一棵树，
站成永恒，没有悲欢的姿势。
一半在尘土里安详，一半在风里飞扬，
一半洒落阴凉，一半沐浴阳光。
非常沉默非常骄傲，从不依靠从不寻找。
以下是我瞎攒的，哪位能给翻个好点的么？
Had a next life,
I‘d be a tree.
Standing still,
Throughout eternity,
No happy or sorrow.
Firmly, staying at root, while
Freely, soaring into the wind.
Beneath the noon-sun, and
Dropping the shades.
Be silent and proud, I‘d stand,
Never expecting, and
Never depending.

O*e2008-05-28 07:05

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If I can chose, I want to come back as a tree
Erected until the end of time,
Emotionless.
Cradled peacefully by the soil underneath,
Swinging freely following the direction of the wind.
Soaked in shadow while bathing in the sun
Silent yet proud
Not needing anyone else to rely on.

【在 g****e 的大作中提到】

: 各位能帮忙看一下这个翻译吗？多谢了！
: 原文：
: 如果有来生，要做一棵树，
: 站成永恒，没有悲欢的姿势。
: 一半在尘土里安详，一半在风里飞扬，
: 一半洒落阴凉，一半沐浴阳光。
: 非常沉默非常骄傲，从不依靠从不寻找。
: 以下是我瞎攒的，哪位能给翻个好点的么？
: Had a next life,
: I‘d be a tree.

e*e2008-05-28 07:05

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In my next life, I will be a tree,
motionless as an eternity, and emotion free.
I will root deep in the earth, firm and secure;
I will swing in the wind, breathe in full leisure.
Enjoy the sun and tender my shade, charge no fee --
asking none for nothing, will as silent as proud I be.

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a*r2008-05-28 07:05

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s*62008-05-28 07:05

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If there is a next life, I want to become a tree
I will live to eternity, neither happy nor sad
Half of me will go deep in earth with peace, and half of me up swinging in
wind
I will bestow a cool shade, and meanwhile bask under the sun
As silent and proud as I will be, I won't rely on others nor look around

v*e2008-05-28 07:05

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at first reading I thought "a tree" is a binary tree or red-black tree or
something fancy.... /_\

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d*y2008-05-28 07:05

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我来瞎写一个
If I can reborn, I will be a tree
Stand for eternity, with no sorrow or bliss.
Peace in soil, dance in wind.
Cool in shade, soak in light.
still and proud,
Independent and free.

Y*e2008-05-28 07:05

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good

【在 d********y 的大作中提到】

: 我来瞎写一个
: If I can reborn, I will be a tree
: Stand for eternity, with no sorrow or bliss.
: Peace in soil, dance in wind.
: Cool in shade, soak in light.
: still and proud,
: Independent and free.