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两篇我极喜欢但可惜最后没用上的申请文书

两篇我极喜欢但可惜最后没用上的申请文书

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两篇我极喜欢但可惜最后没用上的申请文书
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这两篇申请文书是申请UVA的,我觉得丫丫以小见大写得特别好,角度独特,看似普通选材却很有自己的思想,读起来流畅自然,只是UVA早录EA轮的结果还没出来,丫丫已经被加州理工先录了,为了不影响其他人的录取,我们撤出了UVA的申请,不过这两篇文书还是很有看头的。
文书题目一:School of Engineering and Applied Sciences - Describe an engineering feat that serves the common good and why it inspires you to study engineering. (250 words)
译文:这个题目是工程和应用科学学院专门要求的——描述一个既可以为大众服务又激励你选择工程专业的工程壮举(250字)
橡皮鸭
从聚合物的塑形到完成装饰,制造一个橡皮鸭是一个比较复杂的过程,但是,橡皮鸭真正激励我的并不是它的制作工艺,而是它对世界文化的塑造和影响。
在泰国,橡皮鸭是倡导民主抗议活动的标志物;在美国,橡皮鸭是童年和思乡的一种象征;在科学界,橡皮鸭被用在气象学研究,譬如NASA就用它来研究浪涛的模型,可以说贯穿全球和整个时代,橡皮鸭是一个无处不在令人惊奇的一种存在。
而我与橡皮鸭之间的个人经历则激发了我走向工程专业的兴趣。在我小时候,我的浴缸里曾有过多个橡皮鸭,我记得在嘉年华游戏中赢过它做奖品,看芝麻街动画片时曾随片放声高唱过其中的橡皮鸭歌曲「Do De Rubber Duck」,这些都是我童年的标志性回忆,即使到了今天,橡皮鸭依旧是我热爱解决问题的标志物,因为我的桌子上总会有一个橡皮鸭,在需要的时候我可以向它解释我的程序——这就是著名的橡皮鸭debugging,即使我已经17岁了,橡皮鸭依旧是我生活中重要的一部分。
不是每项工程壮举都必须是科学上极其复杂尖端的,只有那些学术界的人才能理解和应用,小小的橡皮鸭让我领会到了即使是最简单的事情也会有极大的文化冲击力,所以我想能够创造出像橡皮鸭这样的东西,通过学习工程领域来发明出造福普通大众的技术。


The Rubber Duck

From sculpting to decorating the vinyl polymer material, engineering a rubber duck is quite a complex process. However, what truly inspires me about the rubber duck is not how it is constructed, but how it has shaped world culture.

 

In Thailand, the rubber duck symbolizes pro-democracy protest. In America, the duck symbolizes childhood and nostalgia. In science, the rubber duck even symbolizes climatology, as groups, such as NASA, have used them to study tidal patterns. Throughout the globe and time, rubber ducks have remained culturally relevant, an awe-inspiring feat.

 

Additionally, my personal experience with rubber ducks has inspired me as an engineer. I grew up with numerous ducks in my bathtub. I remember winning them at carnival games, and watching Ernie on Sesame Street sing the “Do De Rubber Duck” song. They symbolize my childhood, and today, they also symbolize my love for problem-solving. As I always have a rubber duck on my desk, so in need, I can explain my code to it - a process known as rubber duck debugging. Even at 17, the duck remains significant in my life.

 

Not every engineering invention needs to be scientifically complex, so only those in high academia can comprehend or utilize it. This is what the rubber duck taught me, for even the simplistic things can have far reaching cultural impacts. I want to create inventions like the rubber duck. I want to study engineering to invent technology that has a global impact to empower the common people.

 

文书题目二:We are a community with quirks, both in language and in traditions. Describe one of your quirks and why it is part of who you are. (250 words)

译文:我们(UVA)是一个喜欢搞怪的群体,不论是在语言上还是从传统看,描述一个你习惯搞怪的事情,并解释为什么。
敲下编辑。
我的计算机屏幕瞬间闪烁起各种颜色鲜艳的方块,然后在我的整理可视化器上按高度规则地排列起来,过去五个小时里的学习、研究、形成思路、写程序、反复调试错误等等,在我眼前终于演绎成完美的产品,我抓过手机,打开Spotify(一种音乐app,独舞注),开始高分贝播放我最喜欢的音乐,同时随着音乐尽情舞蹈起来。
我的一个搞怪癖好就是我喜欢突然舞蹈起来。
我不是一个舞者,我也从没试图成为一个跳舞的人,我只喜欢在我高兴的时候随着音乐手舞足蹈尽情地释放自己,哪怕是独自一个人在雨中、我也可以全然不顾周围窗户里射出的迷惑目光,让我的身体和音乐的节奏浑然一体,因为在我的世界里,此时存在的只有音乐和我自己。
虽然这个搞怪癖好源于我对音乐和舞蹈的热爱,但是更多的则是我最珍视的一种信念的体验:享受此刻!不管是因为我们对过去错误的省视还是对未来目标的担忧,我们常常不能全心全意地享受当下的瞬间,可生命飞过,我实在不想从未真正地生活过,因此特别是在有标志性意义的时刻,我会大声放起音乐,全身心投入尽情舞蹈起来,尽情享受这美丽的瞬间。


I click compile.

 

My computer screen flashes with colorful bars sorting themselves by height in my selection sort visualizer. The past five hours of studying selection sort, scribbling down my thoughts in the stages of planning, and debugging error after error have finally amounted into the final product running perfectly before my eyes. I scramble to my phone. Open up Spotify. Play my latest favorite song at the top volume, and start dancing my heart out within my room.

 

One of my quirks is I love to break out into dance.

 

I am not a dancer, nor do I strive to be one. I just love to move around and enjoy the music during times of joy. Whether I am alone or outside in the rain with people giving me confusing looks from their windows, I immerse myself in music and let my body become one with the beat. In my mind, it is only me and the music.

 

Although this quirk stems from my love of music and movement, it also represents one of my most valued practices: savoring the moment. Whether it is because we are focused on mistakes from our past or goals for our future, we all struggle with living in the present. Life passes by fast, and I never want to reflect and realize that I never actually lived it. Thus, especially during monumental occasions, I always turn up my music, dance my heart out, and savor the beautiful moment of the now.

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