中译英｜父亲去世一年后，「天才儿子」金晓宇的独居生活
在一些很平常的瞬间，金晓宇会惊觉，原来母亲、父亲都不在了。去餐厅吃饭，他看到蔬菜炒鸡蛋，说这道菜爸爸也会做。聊到衣服，他记得爸爸有件鳄鱼牌的衬衫。在空荡荡的房间里打转，他指着餐桌说，最开始坐在那里的是4个人，后来哥哥去了国外，变成3个，妈妈生病去世后，父子俩坐在那里。现在只剩下他一个人了。
In some day to day moments, Jin Xiaoyu would suddenly realize that both his Mom and Dad are not with him anymore. When he dined in a restaurant and saw scrambled eggs with vegetables, he recalled that his Dad used to cook the dish for him.When speaking of clothes, he remembered his Dad used to wear a Cartelo shirt. Pacing around the empty room and pointing at the dining table, he reflected on the past. There used to be four of them in the family, all seated at the table. After his elder brother went abroad, it was just him, Mom and Dad. Then, his Mom fell ill and passed away, leaving him and his Dad. And now, he is all alone.
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Nikolae，新手人民教师，声优探索者，乃木坂47与AKB49
校对组：
Xiao，富春江小翻译
Lora，一只庸俗的骡，一只脱离了高级趣味的骡
解析组：
Lora，一只庸俗的骡，一只脱离了高级趣味的骡
1.表示某人不在了可以用Be gone, pass away等，这里为了凸显金晓宇的孤独，用Not with him any more.
2.爸爸常给他做饭，有件一样的衣服，都是爸爸生前的事情，可以用一般过去时，或者used to do表示过去常常。
3.在房间打转，可以用Pace表示走得慢，用Around表示转来转去。
4.家里从四个人变成一个人的过程分为4个阶段，断为4句。4个人阶段为一句，变成3人为一句，变成2人为一句，最后只剩1人为一句且时态变成现在时。
5.只剩他一人，Be all alone, On one's own, Be left alone均可。
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