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Flash of White / Blasting Point

遍野
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Flash of White

In the reflection of azure
I glimpsed the dawn's misty light
Millions of dewdrops, lost their way 
deep in that blue, ever so bright

Ignite that gaze, set it alight?
Oh, if only I could, with all that sunny delight
Yet, slowly melted myself into the silky winds
humming its tune, tears in my sight

Out of the mist, a flash of white  
raced at its full speed of might 
100 miles… where are you going to turn, Dear?
left or right?

( Note: the flash of white -- a new white racing car)

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Blasting Point (Conversation about a Bridge)

Spanning the valley, it stands
graceful frame, with arches grand
simple lines, yet a sight so bold
but within, a secret told.

The most beautiful bridge
though it has a blasting point
“wish I didn't know”
“wish it never explode”
     I'd surely erase the point since you said so.

A bridge of spirit
with thoughts that twinkle and bind
linked you and me
with a beautiful mind, pure and kind

Wonder if it has a blasting point
that could break our hold?
“no angle to drill the whole”
“no point to split our soul”
     I'll cherish it forever, the bridge of spirit, since you said so.

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Note: blashing point, or explosion point (爆破点) -- in the mechanics of explosion(爆炸力学), every building/bridge/ or any construction, at the time they were built, some explosion points were built in with very accurate calculations on the position/angle/... 

 

 

 

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遍野
2 楼
交盈盈作业(去年秋天的作业),试着学习。。。 各位见笑,多赐教~~~~ 顺祝新年快乐!~~~
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盈盈一笑间
3 楼
沙发点赞!热烈欢迎诗坛大才女遍野教授雅临美坛,撒花,撒花~~
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盈盈一笑间
4 楼
遍野老师,新年快乐!热烈欢迎,谢谢支持。huuuuuuggggggggggg
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盈盈一笑间
5 楼
In the reflection of azure I glimpsed the dawn's misty light
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盈盈一笑间
6 楼
A bridge of spirit with thoughts that twinkle and bind
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盈盈一笑间
7 楼
Your creativity knows no bounds. it's a joy to read them.
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遍野
8 楼
a moment I caught that could set the morning alight --
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遍野
9 楼
this piece is about a very cool racing car :+)~~~~
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遍野
10 楼
could be "twin bridge" -- one in reality, the other in

could be "twin bridge" -- one in reality, the other in spirit -- thinking of the explosion points ~~~~~

 

 

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遍野
11 楼
still trying to feel about the rhyme of English~~~
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遍野
12 楼
谢谢盈盈!守诺交作业哈~~~ 这里跟帖 length 好像受限制~~
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遍野
13 楼
Huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuggggggggggggggggggggggggggg~~~~~~
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暖冬cool夏
14 楼
Great poems! 欣赏了!
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遍野
15 楼
谢谢!Just came and start to learn~~~
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方外居士
16 楼
标题长度上限应该还是60个字。应该是每个英语字母占一个汉字的位置,这就写不了几个英文单词了。还是汉语精炼!
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遍野
17 楼
:+) ~~~ 谢谢居士!
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