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Grapes, unripe and green 青涩的葡萄
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Grapes, unripe and green 青涩的葡萄

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楼主 (文学城)

Grapes, unripe and green


Grapes, unripe and green
dangle on French braids of hair
shine like the faces of teens
absorb sugar from the summer's air

Grapes, ripe and green
sleep on the autumn's night screen
shine like the moonlit tears
humming a nocturne only lovers can hear

CHAT-GPT

The poem you have provided is a concise and evocative piece that captures the essence of grapes and their transformative journey from unripeness to ripeness. Let's analyze it further:

The poem begins with the repetition of the line "Grapes, unripe and green," which sets the initial tone and establishes the central image. The use of repetition creates emphasis and reinforces the idea of the grapes' immaturity. Additionally, the line is visually striking as it compares the grapes to "French braids of hair," suggesting a delicate and intertwined appearance.

The next line, "shine like the faces of teens," introduces a simile that associates the brightness of the unripe grapes with the youthful glow of teenagers. This comparison suggests a sense of vitality and potential in the early stage of growth.

The third line, "absorb sugar from the summer's air," brings attention to the grapes' process of maturation. It highlights their ability to draw nourishment from their surroundings, specifically the sweetness of the summer season. This line adds a sensory dimension to the poem, evoking the aroma and atmosphere of summer.

The second stanza begins with the line "Grapes, ripe and green," marking a transition in the grapes' state from unripe to ripe. The inclusion of "green" in this line may suggest that the grapes still retain some of their earlier hue even when they reach maturity. This contrast hints at the multi-faceted nature of growth and change.

The following line, "sleep on the autumn's night screen," creates a vivid image of the grapes resting or suspended in the darkness of the autumn night. The word "screen" implies a projection or a backdrop, perhaps alluding to the transformative nature of the seasons and the passage of time.

The final two lines, "shine like the moonlit tears / humming a nocturne only lovers can hear," introduce an element of romanticism. The simile compares the radiance of the ripe grapes to the shimmering quality of tears under moonlight, invoking a sense of beauty and emotional depth. The mention of a nocturne, a piece of music typically played at night, further accentuates the idea of a serene and intimate atmosphere. The phrase "only lovers can hear" adds an element of exclusivity and intimacy, suggesting that the beauty and music of the grapes are reserved for those who are deeply connected.

Overall, the poem explores the journey of grapes from their unripe state to ripeness, using vivid imagery and sensory details to evoke emotions and associations. It captures the essence of growth, transformation, and the beauty found in nature's cycles.

 

CHAT-GPT 翻译

青翠未熟的葡萄
青翠未熟的葡萄
垂挂在法式编发的发辫上
犹如青春少女的面庞闪耀
从夏日空气中吸取甜蜜

成熟青翠的葡萄
沉睡在秋夜的银幕上
犹如月光洒下的泪水
哼唱着只有恋人才能听到的夜曲

俺家的青涩的葡萄

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renqiulan
2 楼
Your finger tip is your magic wand's tip.
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renqiulan
3 楼
A poet is a magician who makes everything seem possible.
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花似鹿葱
4 楼
+100
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renqiulan
5 楼
How about the red globe grapes?They're left out in the cold.
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renqiulan
6 楼
Just kidding. I like green grapes, if they are ripe & sweet.
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lovecat08
7 楼
+100
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lovecat08
8 楼
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renqiulan
9 楼
There are no sour grapes in this poem. Nice!
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renqiulan
10 楼
Let there be grapevines along every lover's lane.
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renqiulan
11 楼
I don't drink, but I'm drunk on poetic grapes.
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shuier
12 楼
I drink, but I won't be drunk on green grapes.
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renqiulan
13 楼
You always appear out of thin air. Hi, how is it going?
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shuier
14 楼
Good. Just swinging by, checking out the green grapes.
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renqiulan
15 楼
Would you like to taste them?
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renqiulan
16 楼
Well, she has just vanished into thin air.
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颤音
17 楼
Renzi, thanks for your generous compliments, humbled
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颤音
18 楼
they are super sweet, the downside is numerous seeds :-(
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颤音
19 楼
how about Port?
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颤音
20 楼
thanks! really nice words
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颤音
21 楼
speaking of magicians, the Coen Brothers are true magicians
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颤音
22 楼
stunned by The Ballad of Buster Scruggs, will check out more
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shuier
23 楼
See..you...soon!
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花似鹿葱
24 楼
好性感的葡萄啊 。。。
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renqiulan
25 楼
Renzi. Hahahaha....
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