Many a me 在英文诗歌网站上首页 显摆一把

好玩的是这个网站是个电脑高手弄的，他弄了个给诗歌打分的，按照分数置顶，不过他也“优化”他的打分系统。最新版给的分数和老板几乎180度转弯。这个是近一年前写的，那时分数很低的，新版来了，竟然置顶了。哈哈哈。

 

Many a Me

Many a Me
drowned in your eyes
roll down your face
and fall onto my palms
cold and warm
Seep through my fingers
drop by drop
vanish into the soil
© Oct '22

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Shidare - It sounds like the beautiful song of a teardrop.... Singing of the melancholic life of its own kind. The rythym... very soothing and easy. Beautiful precious one
6 hours ago

Busy - Fantastic poem. I can relate to it well. Keep going
8 hours ago

Busy - Interpretation first put forward by the profound german philosopher professor martin Heidegger. Or was it Nietzsche before him. I dunno! Lol
7 hours ago

Busy - But lol this is but my interpretation of the poem. Sorry if it is miles out.
7 hours ago

Busy - We all get sanded down and vanished like pieces of wood lol in Zen I think they call it the lacquer barrel but I am not sure. But I had a friend a few years ago telling me about it. You never know it may be a universal! But as a particular it related to me anyway. Great poem.
7 hours ago

 

 

祝贺登顶！

祝贺攻占光明顶！让敌人们颤抖去吧~~~

颤颤自颤呢！

颤音的投入很特别特色，想起张宗昌的诗

大明湖，明湖大，
大明湖裡有荷花，
荷花上面有蛤蟆，
一戳一蹦達。

都是有童趣或者生趣，感觉好玩。。。誒诶诶，一戳一蹦跶

 

奇妙！

哈哈哈，就是好玩

套用刘晓波的名言，我没有敌人，哈哈哈

自由人联想丰富，哈哈哈，不过这蛤蟆诗生动上口

谢谢喵

很棒。颤颤继续Tears Down Heart Up.

哈哈，这个其实蛮有文化，

大明湖，小蛤蟆

一戳蛤蟆一蹦跶

看到它尿大明湖

老张心里乐开花

慢慢地，从一些诗歌里，能体会一些生命的东西。诗心、天真。投入，又不是现代企业文化里所说的发疯般的“投入”

回味起来，反而觉得那些竞折腰，浪淘沙并不是好诗了。没有诗心也。我还是宁愿自己能有那种开放的天真诗心。:)

不过，也许我说的过于一己一时之见了。。。呵呵。有点意思，有点感触

 

老张真是有让人喜欢的地方，最少来说吧，人家就信老天造人，是让人活得高兴的。

牛！

哈哈哈，妙

想到什么写什么就好，Dickinson 好像活着的时候写的都是给自己看的，绝大多数都没发表过

谢谢，hearts down，too，哈哈哈

谢谢西东兄！

热烈祝贺。。。您在说消逝的爱情吗？

谢谢，本意如此 ：-）

Ups/downs/That's life, young man. 大学英文老师教的第一句诗。