【译林】星战名句之翻译——请帮忙改进,谢谢# Translation - 译林
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这学期教的中文班打算在学期汇演中表演星战片段。我挑了几段脍炙人口的场景和台词
,计划让学生用中文表演,让观众猜角色和台词。我没看过(手边也找不到)星战的中
文版小说,自己找了几个桥段翻。一边翻,电影里的种种场面历历如在眼前,令人感喟。
有些句子(如2、6、8)想不出更好的翻译,贴出来向大家请教。也欢迎提议其他容易
表演的名段子。谢谢!
1.
Narrator: Long, long ago in a galaxy far, far away…
在很久很久以前,在很远很远的星球上……
2.
Qui-Gon: He's the chosen one. I'm sure of it.
他是那个被选中的人。我肯定。
3.
Emperor Palpataine: Have you ever heard the story of Darth Plagueis the Wise
? … He was so powerful, he could even keep the ones he cared about from
dying.
你听说过智者Darth Plagueis的故事吗?……他是那么强大,能让他关心的人起死回生。
Anakin: Is it possible to learn this power?
可以学习这种起死回生的力量吗?
Palpitaine: Not from a Jedi.
从绝地武士那里学不到。
4.
Emperor Palpitaine: Learn the power of the Dark Side and you can save Padme
from certain death.
学习黑暗的力量,你就能让Padme不死。
5.
Padme Amidala: I don't know you anymore ...Anakin, you're breaking my heart.
You're going down a path I can't follow.
我不认识你了……Anakin,你让我伤心透了。你走的这条路,我不能再跟着了。
(翻到这句时强烈回忆起Padme的绝望神态。)
6.
Obi-Wan: You were the chosen one! It was said that you were supposed to
destroy the Sith, not join them!
你是天意选中的人!都说你是那个消灭西斯的人,不是加入他们!
(翻到这句时强烈回忆起Obi-Wan的绝望语气。这个和上一个场景的确演得回肠荡气。)
7.
Princess Leia: General Kenobi, years ago you served my father in the Clone
Wars. Now he begs you to help him in his struggle against the Empire. I
regret that I am unable to present my father's request to you in person, but
my ship has fallen under attack and I'm afraid my mission to bring you to
Alderaan has failed. I have placed information vital to the survival of the
Rebellion into the memory systems of this R2 unit. My father will know how
to retrieve it. You must see this droid safely delivered to him on Alderaan.
This is our most desperate hour. Help me, Obi-Wan Kenobi. You're my only
hope.
Kenobi将军,多年前你在克隆战役中效忠于我的父亲。现在,他请求你帮助他与帝国作
斗争。抱歉我不能当面转达我父亲的请求,我的飞船受到攻击,我无法完成把你安全送
到Alderaan的任务。我已将决定义军生死的重要信息藏在这个R2机器人的存储系统里。
我的父亲会知道怎样取出它。请务必将此机器人送到Alderaan,交给我父亲。这是我们
生死存亡的时刻。Obi-Wan Kenobi,请帮助我。你是我唯一的希望。
(最后两句话在电影里多次重复,一个小小的Princess Leia的影像不断呼吁,好可爱
……)
8.
Yoda: Do. Or do not. There is no try.
做,或不做。不能试。
9.
Storm Trooper、Obi-Wan以及只有costumes、没有台词的C3PO和R2D2:
Storm Trooper: Let me see your identification.
让我看你的身份牌。
Obi-Wan: You don't need to see his identification.
你不用看他的身份牌。
Storm Trooper: We don't need to see his identification.
我们不用看他的身份牌。
Obi-Wan: These are not the droids you're looking for.
他们不是你们要找的机器人。
Storm Trooper: These are not the droids we're looking for.
他们不是我们要找的机器人。
Obi-Wan: He can go about his business.
他可以走了。
Storm Trooper: You can go about your business.
你可以走了。
Obi-Wan: Move along.
往前走。
Storm Trooper: Move along.
往前走。
(这个“他”是谁?记不清这个段子了,翻得可能不太对。)
10.
Darth Vader: Luke, you do not yet realize your importance. You have only
begun to discover your power. … Join me, and I will complete your training.
Luke,你不知道你有多重要。你刚刚发现你的能量。加入我们,我会完成对你的培训。
Luke: I'll never join you!
我永远不会加入你们!
Vader: If you only knew the power of the Dark Side. Obi-Wan never told you
what happened to your father.
如果你知道黑暗的力量有多大。Obi-Wan从没告诉过你关于你爸爸的事吧。
Luke: He told me enough! He told me you killed him!
他告诉我够多的了!他说你杀了我爸爸!
Vader: No. I am your father.
这不是真的。我是你爸爸。
Luke: No...no. That's not true. That's impossible!
不……不,这不是真的。这不可能!
Vader: Search your feelings. You know it to be true!
你用心想一想。你知道这是真的!
,计划让学生用中文表演,让观众猜角色和台词。我没看过(手边也找不到)星战的中
文版小说,自己找了几个桥段翻。一边翻,电影里的种种场面历历如在眼前,令人感喟。
有些句子(如2、6、8)想不出更好的翻译,贴出来向大家请教。也欢迎提议其他容易
表演的名段子。谢谢!
1.
Narrator: Long, long ago in a galaxy far, far away…
在很久很久以前,在很远很远的星球上……
2.
Qui-Gon: He's the chosen one. I'm sure of it.
他是那个被选中的人。我肯定。
3.
Emperor Palpataine: Have you ever heard the story of Darth Plagueis the Wise
? … He was so powerful, he could even keep the ones he cared about from
dying.
你听说过智者Darth Plagueis的故事吗?……他是那么强大,能让他关心的人起死回生。
Anakin: Is it possible to learn this power?
可以学习这种起死回生的力量吗?
Palpitaine: Not from a Jedi.
从绝地武士那里学不到。
4.
Emperor Palpitaine: Learn the power of the Dark Side and you can save Padme
from certain death.
学习黑暗的力量,你就能让Padme不死。
5.
Padme Amidala: I don't know you anymore ...Anakin, you're breaking my heart.
You're going down a path I can't follow.
我不认识你了……Anakin,你让我伤心透了。你走的这条路,我不能再跟着了。
(翻到这句时强烈回忆起Padme的绝望神态。)
6.
Obi-Wan: You were the chosen one! It was said that you were supposed to
destroy the Sith, not join them!
你是天意选中的人!都说你是那个消灭西斯的人,不是加入他们!
(翻到这句时强烈回忆起Obi-Wan的绝望语气。这个和上一个场景的确演得回肠荡气。)
7.
Princess Leia: General Kenobi, years ago you served my father in the Clone
Wars. Now he begs you to help him in his struggle against the Empire. I
regret that I am unable to present my father's request to you in person, but
my ship has fallen under attack and I'm afraid my mission to bring you to
Alderaan has failed. I have placed information vital to the survival of the
Rebellion into the memory systems of this R2 unit. My father will know how
to retrieve it. You must see this droid safely delivered to him on Alderaan.
This is our most desperate hour. Help me, Obi-Wan Kenobi. You're my only
hope.
Kenobi将军,多年前你在克隆战役中效忠于我的父亲。现在,他请求你帮助他与帝国作
斗争。抱歉我不能当面转达我父亲的请求,我的飞船受到攻击,我无法完成把你安全送
到Alderaan的任务。我已将决定义军生死的重要信息藏在这个R2机器人的存储系统里。
我的父亲会知道怎样取出它。请务必将此机器人送到Alderaan,交给我父亲。这是我们
生死存亡的时刻。Obi-Wan Kenobi,请帮助我。你是我唯一的希望。
(最后两句话在电影里多次重复,一个小小的Princess Leia的影像不断呼吁,好可爱
……)
8.
Yoda: Do. Or do not. There is no try.
做,或不做。不能试。
9.
Storm Trooper、Obi-Wan以及只有costumes、没有台词的C3PO和R2D2:
Storm Trooper: Let me see your identification.
让我看你的身份牌。
Obi-Wan: You don't need to see his identification.
你不用看他的身份牌。
Storm Trooper: We don't need to see his identification.
我们不用看他的身份牌。
Obi-Wan: These are not the droids you're looking for.
他们不是你们要找的机器人。
Storm Trooper: These are not the droids we're looking for.
他们不是我们要找的机器人。
Obi-Wan: He can go about his business.
他可以走了。
Storm Trooper: You can go about your business.
你可以走了。
Obi-Wan: Move along.
往前走。
Storm Trooper: Move along.
往前走。
(这个“他”是谁?记不清这个段子了,翻得可能不太对。)
10.
Darth Vader: Luke, you do not yet realize your importance. You have only
begun to discover your power. … Join me, and I will complete your training.
Luke,你不知道你有多重要。你刚刚发现你的能量。加入我们,我会完成对你的培训。
Luke: I'll never join you!
我永远不会加入你们!
Vader: If you only knew the power of the Dark Side. Obi-Wan never told you
what happened to your father.
如果你知道黑暗的力量有多大。Obi-Wan从没告诉过你关于你爸爸的事吧。
Luke: He told me enough! He told me you killed him!
他告诉我够多的了!他说你杀了我爸爸!
Vader: No. I am your father.
这不是真的。我是你爸爸。
Luke: No...no. That's not true. That's impossible!
不……不,这不是真的。这不可能!
Vader: Search your feelings. You know it to be true!
你用心想一想。你知道这是真的!