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To the west (1.1)(t)

To the west (1.1)(t)# Translation - 译林

or2003-09-24 07:09

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I had a secret.
I loved the color of green.
And I thought listening to birds singing, smelling the flowers, bathing in the
sun-warmed stream, or taking a nap in the shade of trees were quite pleasant
too.
Then I must have had lots of secrets.
As I was a dwarf.
You might encounter me on the road, and you would see a sturdy fellow who
couldn’t even reach your shoulder with a helmet on the head—of course, you
must be a human bean or an elf in the first place. Frankly I had never seen
an elf, and

or2003-09-24 07:09

2 楼

原文是很好很好的，是我看过的网络原创中最好的，轻轻松松就划出了小说与故事之
间的鸿沟。(我如果说只有它算有小说的模样与味道，会不会给众写手读者踩死？：P)
至於英文版，嘻嘻，远远难以望其项背(有这个成语嘛)。欢迎打击性的砖头。;P

a
you
seen
much,
as
living
knew
dealings
Lonely
at
You
Dwarves
I

l*y2003-09-24 07:09

3 楼

Because or since? sorry never quite understand which one of these are strong.
=/
have to be.... a human bean?
and
back
It
live
you
never
heart-broken
single here feel weird...
午
的
灵
的
告

【在 or 的大作中提到】

: I had a secret.
: I loved the color of green.
: And I thought listening to birds singing, smelling the flowers, bathing in the
: sun-warmed stream, or taking a nap in the shade of trees were quite pleasant
: too.
: Then I must have had lots of secrets.
: As I was a dwarf.
: You might encounter me on the road, and you would see a sturdy fellow who
: couldn’t even reach your shoulder with a helmet on the head—of course, you
: must be a human bean or an elf in the first place. Frankly I had never seen

j*e2003-09-24 07:09

4 楼

You did such a great job:-)
Just a few places where I have different choices:
(bathing in a stream) bathing in the cozy waters of a stream?
(journeyed a lot) wandered a lot?
(noisiness) high volume?
(at that time) during that time?
(promoted) prompted?

a
and
back
much,
(at
(promoted). It
live
you
never
heart-broken
午
的
灵
的
告

【在 or 的大作中提到】

or2003-09-24 07:09

5 楼

Sknaht ot uoy syug, ynnyl, annetna, dna enihpesoj, in my beloved mother
language - dwarvish..

pleasant
you
seen
back
much,
as
living
knew
dealings
Lonely
myself
place
secret
if

l*y2003-09-24 07:09

6 楼

ok... now translate that! :D

in
who
wicked
too
who

【在 or 的大作中提到】

: Sknaht ot uoy syug, ynnyl, annetna, dna enihpesoj, in my beloved mother
: language - dwarvish..
:
: pleasant
: you
: seen
: back
: much,
: as
: living

l*y2003-09-24 07:09

7 楼

um, never mind. i just need to twist my neck a little bit...

bathing
course,
never
only
him,
had

【在 l***y 的大作中提到】

: ok... now translate that! :D
:
: in
: who
: wicked
: too
: who

or2003-09-24 07:09

8 楼

有人能猜出来吗？猜出来是神童呵呵~

bathing
course,
never
only
him,
had

【在 l***y 的大作中提到】

: ok... now translate that! :D
:
: in
: who
: wicked
: too
: who

l*y2003-09-24 07:09

9 楼

哇。我是天才儿童耶

fellow
to..sounds
noisiness
cousin,

【在 or 的大作中提到】

: 有人能猜出来吗？猜出来是神童呵呵~
:
: bathing
: course,
: never
: only
: him,
: had

j*e2003-09-24 07:09

10 楼

"Thank to you guys",hehe,然后就是名字啦。
【在 or (孤山的矮人) 的大作中提到: 】
fellow
to..sounds
noisiness
cousin,

a*a2003-09-24 07:09

11 楼

是thanks～

【在 j*******e 的大作中提到】

: "Thank to you guys",hehe,然后就是名字啦。
: 【在 or (孤山的矮人) 的大作中提到: 】
: fellow
: to..sounds
: noisiness
: cousin,

or2003-09-24 07:09

12 楼

后生可畏阿~
奖励小朋友们一句如假包换的精灵语 nai elen siluva lyenna.

a*a2003-09-24 07:09

13 楼

我可不是啊。。。我就会接下茬，鸡蛋里挑骨头～～hoho

or2003-09-24 07:09

14 楼

"human bean" is my joke, becoz in tolkien's world there's no such modern
phrase like "human beings", instead he used "Men" and i as a woman was not
fully happy with it. "Big People" will fit precisely, thanks to easylife's
thourough research.

you
seen

【在 l***y 的大作中提到】

: 哇。我是天才儿童耶
:
: fellow
: to..sounds
: noisiness
: cousin,